Chapter 4.16-- His Doing

posted 30th Oct 2015, 8:25 AM

Chapter 4.16-- His Doing
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view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Oct 2015, 8:25 AM

HeSerpenty

Whaaat, Kal thinks KEYMEN is behind all this? We already know he's been super paranoid about our happy-go-lucky, silly doctor friend....I woulda never thought him the VENGEFUL type :O. Wonder why Keymen would want revenge? ^__^

****EDIT****
Thank you all so much for your patience and comments and putting up with the WIP <333. It's so great to know that you guys are so supportive!!

I um..feel worried for this civilian here X'D...

Also I experimented a bit with a couple of the backgrounds.....when the backgrounds aren't important I kinda just left them blank. Um... *shrugs* well, whaddya think?


view Chris the Blue's profile

30th Oct 2015, 8:42 AM

Chris the Blue

It's that Keymaster's fault!

view HeSerpenty's profile

31st Oct 2015, 9:48 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha "Keymaster"...hey, I like that!
AND YEA ITS ALL [totally not] HIS FAULT! XDD

view Seabiscuit's profile

30th Oct 2015, 8:46 AM

Seabiscuit

Bwahahha, I love Kalv's panic.:D
Aw, I hope your week improves! This page is still amazing as it is~

view HeSerpenty's profile

31st Oct 2015, 9:49 PM

HeSerpenty

Heheh it's kinda nice to see him sweat... I'll admit that XD

Thank you Sea!! It has <3, and its nice to know you guys are so supportive <333

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30th Oct 2015, 11:22 AM

Vivocateur

I was too caught up in Kalverick's funny meltdown antics to even notice the unfinished backgrounds.
If word gets out….XD

view HeSerpenty's profile

31st Oct 2015, 9:51 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL he just had to say that XD--- you know when you SAY "if word gets out" it done means the word already got out! X'D

What a noob :P lolol

30th Oct 2015, 1:57 PM

Southern Cross

Well, if Keymen IS seeking revenge on Kalverick- the bastard probably deserves it.

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31st Oct 2015, 9:51 PM

HeSerpenty

Ooohohoo you can be sure of THAT lolol

<3

view Jarvi's profile

30th Oct 2015, 2:52 PM

Jarvi

<pac pac pac> Silly daughter and her xxxpanels :P Don't worry about the delay :P
Though once again.. consider my suggestions as they might help you manage those and make your life less stressful ;p

view HeSerpenty's profile

31st Oct 2015, 9:52 PM

HeSerpenty

NO DAD STOP TRYIN TO GET ME TO MAKE SMALLER PAGES! I WON'T DO it! My other comic will have small pages tho I promise <3 (that I do alongside Serpents of course :D)

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31st Oct 2015, 10:23 PM

Jarvi

<pacpacpac> xD

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1st Nov 2015, 3:16 PM

HeSerpenty

Daad!! Stop "pac-ing" me in front of all my FRIENDS D':

Lolol X'D

view Jarvi's profile

1st Nov 2015, 11:47 PM

Jarvi

I'm a dad that wants to be cool! I have to be an embarassment to you! That's how it works! xD

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30th Oct 2015, 3:21 PM

ProfEtheric

I'm gonna be honest: I didn't even notice the page was "incomplete" until I read your Author's Note.

Merek's biting the bullet, eh? That only gets him extra points in my book.

view HeSerpenty's profile

31st Oct 2015, 9:54 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much Prof! Truly, I'm glad it wasn't glaringly obvious X'D

Yes, Merek would not want ANY of his friends/underlings taking any hits because of his decisions-- that's what makes a good leader, me thinks! Takin' responsibility! Something that doesn't seem common these days X'D

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30th Oct 2015, 4:04 PM

MST3KFan

Wait... This was unfinished? I didn't notice as I was too busy enjoying what I was seeing here.

Awesome work, really regardless!

view HeSerpenty's profile

31st Oct 2015, 9:55 PM

HeSerpenty

Aw thank you so much, I am SUPER glad and relieved! I'm glad you enjoyed this page <333...its always nice to see the bad people sweat a little bit!

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30th Oct 2015, 5:09 PM

junoro

Oooh that last panel with his armour and pose makes him look really intimidating! Stay safe, Merek and Co.!

view HeSerpenty's profile

31st Oct 2015, 9:56 PM

HeSerpenty

ooohh GOOD!! I really hoped it would come off that way... I feel relief X'D

Watch thine backs! X'D

view Matt Knab's profile

31st Oct 2015, 2:04 AM

Matt Knab

Yup. Everything that is going on is to hurt your reputation, buddy. No one else really matters, after all.
;)

view HeSerpenty's profile

31st Oct 2015, 9:57 PM

HeSerpenty

You're dang right about that! It's all about #1! However.. I do think there might be a little more to it deep down in that black hole where his heart used to be X'D

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31st Oct 2015, 2:26 AM

Centcomm

There are backgrouns.. Uh I honestly didnt notice .. it looks fine Serpety!

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31st Oct 2015, 9:58 PM

HeSerpenty

Aw thank you Centy!! I'm glad it wasn't completely obvious at first! (dang maybe I should just not do backgrounds all the time I think I could get away with it! and save time and stres! xDD)

view Centcomm's profile

3rd Nov 2015, 4:30 PM

Centcomm

well a lot of web comics do occasionally use gradients and shades for background. if they never happened or dramatically lowered in frequency it would be noticeable. But the occasional time no biggie! its awesome anyway ! :D

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3rd Nov 2015, 7:27 PM

HeSerpenty

I always appreciate the feedback centy!!
I really do need to work out a way to make this easier on me, having such big pages and no buffer x"D. I experimented alittle bit with the partially blank backgrounds here and I'm not fully sure yet. Thank you for the feedback!! <33

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31st Oct 2015, 4:24 AM

azureXtwilight

Something tells me that Keymen is actualy a lot scarier than what he lets on :o

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31st Oct 2015, 9:59 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol!! Is it weird that this comment makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside? hehe I can say one thing for sure.... he's more than just comic relief and plan-maker guy that's for sure!

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1st Nov 2015, 12:32 AM

azureXtwilight

WAT IF ALL THE BAD THINGS HAPPENING TO HIZRUK IS BECAUSE HE IS THE CHILD OF THE MAN WHO TOOK GWYNN FROM KEYMEN

... Now I am getting paranoid.

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1st Nov 2015, 3:17 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL!!! You're starting to sound like Kalverick over there!! Hehehehe <33

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31st Oct 2015, 5:23 AM

alston123

Don't sweat the unfinished page. It just means you have a life. ;P
You read my mind, Serpy. Keymen wants revenge?! AAAAHHHHH!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

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31st Oct 2015, 10:01 PM

HeSerpenty

A busy and a lot of time stressful life, indeed!

LOL and perhaps so! I know.. Keymen? Wants WHAT?
image
(the pic just seemed so fitting XDD)

I can't wait to delve deeper into it with you guys!!

3rd Nov 2015, 9:53 AM

Guest

LOL THIS PICTURE. X'D Oh, Keymen.

Wonder what Kal's gonna do to try to get out of all of this. :3

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3rd Nov 2015, 10:49 AM

HeSerpenty

Lolol he's a character, that Keymen XDDD

OHhhh knowing Kal prooobably somethng NOT GOOD haha

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4th Nov 2015, 5:37 AM

Alicia

OMG Why does CF think I am a guest sometimes? D: I IS NOT A GUEST!! (That was mine. Sorry. lol)

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4th Nov 2015, 7:40 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahahaha I THOUGHT it might be you! I recognized your internet voice <3333

31st Oct 2015, 1:25 PM

PearOfDiscord

Don't worry about the unfinished page! I'm sure you have more than enough things to stress about with your week without this too. I'll happily read SoO, whenever the pages come out, so don't burn yourself out over something as silly as a delayed update, OK? :)

0_0 Things are getting serious! Luckily Kal seems to suspect Keymen so they'll be a chance to stall him. I suspect a confrontation with Kalavarik will show a VERY different side of the good Doctor, since Kal's talk of "revenge" maybe means that everyone's favorite council member (not) did something to Keymen in the past. Did he cut the wounds for (or have someone cut)those very regular scars on Keymen's arms and shoulders? I have a couple of theories (mostly related to Keymen's eyes) as to why, but those'll have to wait for more information.

Panel 8 out of context though... Kal just might be pioneering the very first ballet in Serpent Nation history. I'm sure Daggot would be stunned! :D

view HeSerpenty's profile

31st Oct 2015, 10:05 PM

HeSerpenty

O gosh I just love you and your comments so much <3...have I ever mentioned that? X)

And yes! A glimpse into perhaps another level of Kal, Keymen, and this whole shebang. I cannot WAIT for the glorious reuntion of Keymen and Kal. Naturally you know I can't give spoilersss... but you can be sure all the things link together ;3

LOL....Kalverick ballet.....I now have two things involving Kal that I have to legit draw now XDD

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1st Nov 2015, 9:30 AM

TheD-Wrek

I have this troubled feeling in my gut when I see Kal bit at the same time I kinda like him. A good baddie can be very difficult thing to pull off. :3

view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Nov 2015, 3:18 PM

HeSerpenty

AW YAY D, thank you!! It really is hard to pull off a good baddie................ its nice to hear reassurance that I am maybe on the right track! Getting a troubled feeling in your gut when the baddie is around is a success, I'd say!

view Spelledeg's profile

2nd Nov 2015, 4:11 PM

Spelledeg

The page is finished~ Serpy don't kill yourself over your comic, it's okay to chill when you need to. I love how we're seeing more of Keymen more an more >_> it's totally all Keymen's fault. I love the angles you've used on this page. So much drama is mounting now.

view HeSerpenty's profile

3rd Nov 2015, 11:00 AM

HeSerpenty

Awwww thank you Spelly!! You know me, I can't help it... I probably care way too much about these deadlines!

But indeed there are all sorts of sides to Keymen--we haven't even seen all of them just yet! I look forward to delving more into him X))

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17th Feb 2016, 6:29 PM

Sleeper

Those guys chose the wrong time to start gossiping.

view HeSerpenty's profile

18th Feb 2016, 4:15 PM

HeSerpenty

I'LL say! X'D
Kal ain't havin' it..

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