Chapter 1, Pg 3

posted 11th Jan 2013, 4:47 PM

Chapter 1, Pg 3
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view Centcomm's profile

11th Jan 2013, 5:18 PM

Centcomm

really nice work here.. !

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Jan 2013, 12:14 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank u, my dear! ^_^

view Lady Jean's profile

12th Jan 2013, 5:38 AM

Lady Jean

Hmmm, the plot thickens....
Nice job setting up where the characters are in relation to each other. But, on that first panel, he has ridiculously broad shoulders. Just saying :p

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Jan 2013, 5:26 PM

HeSerpenty

Heard ya, fixed it.... I'm not too good to go back n make changes :)

view Marraph's profile

29th Dec 2013, 3:12 PM

Marraph

The part with the hands was so cool @_@

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29th Dec 2013, 9:31 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank ya very much!

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5th Mar 2014, 2:17 PM

Matt Knab

I like the empty word balloons to signify inaudible dialoge. Nice touch.

view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Jul 2015, 12:31 AM

HeSerpenty

I thought it was a really good idea at the time...and ya know.. it's one of those rare things I used to do that I still think would be a good idea XDDD

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18th Feb 2015, 9:42 PM

Shirokuro

That guy is hawt!

view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Feb 2015, 12:42 AM

HeSerpenty

Hehehe thank you so much! I'm so glad ya think so! <3

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2nd Mar 2015, 3:41 AM

TheD-Wrek

Such a contrast in style from this page to the current one. He looks more... "bishie" if I"m using the word correctly? Not a bad thing. lol.

And look 4 panels and still a great page. XD

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19th Jul 2015, 12:33 AM

HeSerpenty

Lolol it will never go back to 4 panels D!! That ship has SAILED lololol

Wait.. looks more bishie in THIS page or the newer ones? I recall trying reeally hard to make sure he looked good in these old pages. Now I'm just all.. "O shiz page is due in a couple days I gotta DRAW THIS GUY quick!" XDD

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