Chapter 4.6-- Head Start

posted 21st Aug 2015, 8:34 AM

Chapter 4.6-- Head Start
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view HeSerpenty's profile

21st Aug 2015, 8:34 AM

HeSerpenty

**EDIT***

You guys are so wonderful-- I was just going to re-update when the page was finished and delete the WIP... but my gosh your comments all touched my heart so much! I want to cherish them forever. Thank you for being so patient and understanding! It has been a REALLY rough patch for me.

Mom update: She'll most likely be coming home from the hospital today.. which I'm glad about. She's still in a lot of pain though

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Guys, I'm sorry to once again be a disappointment to you all. I thought I could be finished last night but I couldn't make it..and I won't be home all day.

My mom is going to the hospital again today... Not to mention I'm supposed to work. I just don't know what to do.

The page will be finished and updated from this version tomorrow at some point. I didn't want to leave you empty handed TODAY though (I've been doing that too often). Look at it as a little glimpse behind the scenes? My hope is that the unfinished nature of this WIP doesn't take away from the seriousness of this scene. :(
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Thanks again for your patience


view Damatris's profile

21st Aug 2015, 8:42 AM

Damatris

Nooo, Serps, don't worry about us or the page! Take all the time you need!

I hope everything will turn out well soon *multiple huge hugs* <3

view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Aug 2015, 11:57 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank yooou!! It's so nice knowing I have such a wonderful support system!

view revzet's profile

21st Aug 2015, 8:56 AM

revzet

Ayee, it's alright. Happens all the time to me xD. If you need any muscle to help finish this page I'd be glad to help! I hope your mom gets well soon!

view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Aug 2015, 11:57 AM

HeSerpenty

You are so awesome <33

Thanks so much for the help offer again!! You're just way too kind to me! It's nice knowing I have the back up if I need it!

view revzet's profile

25th Aug 2015, 4:03 PM

revzet

No problem, I know the background struggle too well lol.

view zartala's profile

21st Aug 2015, 11:08 AM

zartala

This is a really cool behind the scenes look! Hope your mom gets well soon!

I feel so bad for Gwynnith. She deserves so much better.

view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Aug 2015, 1:38 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much! I m so relieved that the WIP was so well received omg. You are all the best, seriously <3

LOL and yea... she does. Poor thing

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21st Aug 2015, 11:14 AM

Chris the Blue

It's been a while since we've last seen Merlock.
The first thing I thought when I saw him was 'Wow, is that a pregnant man?'

view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Aug 2015, 1:40 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL... pregnant man. Yea he hasn't been around since the first chapter!

view Centcomm's profile

21st Aug 2015, 11:21 AM

Centcomm

Hope things go better soon .. actually the page stands on its own. Sure it doesnt match your normal high quality but its still a awesome page! and the emotion still comes though wonderfully :D

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24th Aug 2015, 1:41 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much Centy! ! That is a huge relief

I am a beacon for bad luck lately it seems x'D

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24th Aug 2015, 2:38 PM

Centcomm

Sweet mother of god Serpenty .. thats a amazing difference . awesome backgrounds as always!

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24th Aug 2015, 11:06 PM

HeSerpenty

Aaah thank you so much!!! You guys make all this effort so worthwhile <3

view Seabiscuit's profile

21st Aug 2015, 11:51 AM

Seabiscuit

Jeez, Serpz, don't worry! Oh gosh, I hope your mom is alright!D:


And Merlock...I wanna see him get his teeth knocked out, holy hell

view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Aug 2015, 11:07 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you Sea! She's still doing pretty rough, but... my momma's a tough cookie.

Lol yeea... Merlock is a PIECE of work that's for sure lolol

view JayyLyn's profile

21st Aug 2015, 12:02 PM

JayyLyn

Oh geez!! D: I hope everything is OK! I'm sure they would be understanding at work if you couldn't make it, considering the circumstances! I know it's impossible to stay focused on work when something like that happens.. :((( I hope it's not serious and things get better soon! Sending the good vibes and well-wishes! (+_+))))))))))))))))

No worries about the update! This is really neat! I love seeing other people's processes, I feel privileged to see how the Serpy pages come to be! :D pleez don't worry about us, just take care! ♡

E: I still don't believe Merlock is Hizzy's real dad! There's no way. What a schmuck. If Merek runs fast enough, maybe he'll get there in time to invert Merlock's face. (ಥ_ಥ) yessss...that is what I want for Christmas. 〒▽〒is it too early to send a letter to the north pole? XP

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24th Aug 2015, 11:14 PM

HeSerpenty

Yess I'm blessed to have co-workers who are very understanding. It is SO hard to focus and try to put on a face for customers when this stuff is going on. But thank you so much for the well-wishes!!

I was so relieved the WIP was so well-received! I'm really glad to have it finished tho. I couldnt bring myself to get rid of all these comments so I just updated the file X'D

Lolol!! Shmuck XDD.. I don't know why I just find calling him that so hilarious. And its not too late!! *sends request to Santa with overnight shipping~*

view Matt Knab's profile

21st Aug 2015, 12:40 PM

Matt Knab

Seeing your work in progress is actually pretty neat, Serpy!

Now...sass that guy right into a creek.

view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Aug 2015, 11:23 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you Matt! I'm so glad! I was really worried people would be disappointed XD

and LOL.. or perhaps the deepest part of the ocean X'D

view lirvilas's profile

21st Aug 2015, 3:28 PM

lirvilas

Let's be real, Serps--your WIP is better than most "work completes".

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24th Aug 2015, 11:24 PM

HeSerpenty

Omg lirvilas.. you're always too kind to me <33

Thank you so much :'D

view MST3KFan's profile

21st Aug 2015, 4:18 PM

MST3KFan

Family is the most important thing. So don't worry about us or the comic right now. Your Mom comes first no matter what.

We'll be here.

It's still cool to see how the comic takes shape. I know I'm jealous of your work because what you show here is about as far as I get with my comic in terms of detail.

view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Aug 2015, 11:26 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks so much MST3K!! Family is reeeally important to me and its so nice to know that I have support that understands and backs me up!

And thank you so much! What you do with MS paint is absolutely amazing don't sell yourself short! I don't think I could make art look so nice with that program-- for truly <33

view DLKmusic's profile

21st Aug 2015, 5:17 PM

DLKmusic

Take care of your mom, Serpy, that's priority 1!

I know this is a work in progress, but the sketched and uncolored background give this page a very dark surrealistic feel, which actually benefit what you are trying to convey here, in both cutscenes. Think about that before you finish it, because you may decide to leave it as stand alone. it still works very well!

view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Aug 2015, 11:31 PM

HeSerpenty

Yess!! I love her so much.. I want her to feel better T__T

Aw gee thank you so much! I had such anxiety that the scene would be ruined by how unfinished the art was... i'm SO relieved that it wasn't. You guys have made my week brighter you have no idea!

view BlueDragon's profile

21st Aug 2015, 7:56 PM

BlueDragon

Man, your pages are always fantastic: half completed or not! Family and taking care of business is far more important. Your fan base understands!!! You're awesome!!!

I just hope everything is okay with your mother :(

view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Aug 2015, 11:34 PM

HeSerpenty

No... YOU'RE awesome <:'D
Thank you so much!! I feel soo blessed to have readers like you! SO BLESSED

And thank you <3. It's been a little rough but I am confident she'll bounce back like she always does. I really appreciate your concern <333

view Xylas_Incarnum's profile

21st Aug 2015, 8:09 PM

Xylas_Incarnum

... How has Merlock survived being such an ass till now anyways?

view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Aug 2015, 11:35 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol I guess the right people just haven't been around. But... I think the right people might just be around now ;D

Or...right "person" :3
We shall see :D :D

view alston123's profile

21st Aug 2015, 8:32 PM

alston123

Aw. Is your mother okay? I hope it's not serious.

view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Aug 2015, 11:42 PM

HeSerpenty

Well.. not really T__T
She has MS and a pretty aggressive form of it. She is always suffering...and sometimes she suffers so much she has to be hospitalized. But I know she'll bounce back like she always does.
Thank you for your concern <3

view gideonland's profile

21st Aug 2015, 9:13 PM

gideonland

Merlock is back at it. He's so funny to me (you know, to poke at and make fun of). His belly is so huge. :-D Poor Gwynnith, but she has some great jokes on him.

Please, do not worry about us! Take care of yourself and your family before anything. We'll be here. No one thinks of you as a 'disappointment'. This page is wonderful - even partially done it still looks great!!
Keep your head up.

view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Aug 2015, 11:52 PM

HeSerpenty

Lololol ya know I never really designed Merlock to be a bad guy to be taken seriously (that's why he has such tight pants XDD). But he is indeed a jerk that causes a lot of misery

And thank you so much!! I felt so deeply encouraged by everyone this last week--that's why I just couldn't bare parting with all these lovely comments and I just updated the file. You guys are the best!

view gideonland's profile

25th Aug 2015, 12:11 AM

gideonland

I see. And it looks great, as I expected no less!
I actually kept checking back and saw that you was updating as you was completing it. Seeing the work in progress was awesome!
Glad to hear things are doing a little better with your mother. :)

view Jarvi's profile

21st Aug 2015, 10:14 PM

Jarvi

It's okay Serpy! Actually the scene was so captivating I didn't even notice that there's anything wrong ^^'

Take care of your mum! :<

view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Aug 2015, 11:52 PM

HeSerpenty

THank you so much, Dad!!! I was hoping it would be the case <33.. I was so nervous about posting an unfinished page lolol

view rufiangel's profile

22nd Aug 2015, 8:51 PM

rufiangel

Hey Serpy, sounds like you're having it really rough :< *hugs super tight* it's totally okay, don't call yourself a disappointment or anything even close to that! I'm impressed you're still posting a WIP and working on the page despite what's going on. Please take your time and always remember, you are a lovely person and you are doing this webcomic for free for other people to enjoy, so take priority on your own mental and physical health and your family time and don't get fatigued, okay? ;3; *hugs again tighter*

view HeSerpenty's profile

25th Aug 2015, 12:04 AM

HeSerpenty

Aww Rufi thank yooou ;___;
I'm so lucky to have friends like you! Gosh this week has been something else-- I just want to have a week where everything goes right for a change lolol.

*hugs* you're always so supportive and encouraging!! I'm so blessed to have you as a friend!!

view TheD-Wrek's profile

23rd Aug 2015, 4:04 PM

TheD-Wrek

The color looks amazing (as always).

Your scenes involving water always look great~ I wouldn't even know where to start. D:

---
Double comment for this page cause knowing what you went though, that background behind Gwynn looks amazing!How did you even... :O

view HeSerpenty's profile

25th Aug 2015, 12:05 AM

HeSerpenty

Lolol!! Aww thank you D!! You caught the updated page before I could even reply to your comment! I'm impressed!

It was a time consuming and deeply involved process... but I'M TIRED of lettin the page kick me around! I'm just so glad that it turned out decent XDD. Thanks a bunch for the support the last couple of days with this!

view junoro's profile

23rd Aug 2015, 8:40 PM

junoro

It's okay, take the time you need to get back on your feet! Take care of those personal things, you're not disappointing anyone if you need a break after all the hard work you put in!

This page is a fascinating look into your page-making process! I actually didn't notice it wasn't complete right away, because I was so wrapped up in the story! But seriously, take a break if you need to!

view HeSerpenty's profile

25th Aug 2015, 12:19 AM

HeSerpenty

I'm so happy to hear that lolol.. I was kinda hoping people wouldn't notice XDD. But... even tho it was noticed I'm so thrilled at the overwhelming support! I am exceedingly grateful!!!
THank you so much!!!

24th Aug 2015, 1:07 PM

Guesticus

Family take priority

Speaking of: someone needs to remove over-inflated snake-balloon, pronto!!

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25th Aug 2015, 12:21 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL.. over inflated snake balloon XDD
Now I feel like it should be a thing xD

Thanks so much for understanding!

view JammyTheBirb's profile

26th Aug 2015, 2:44 PM

JammyTheBirb

Aw man... I reached the end of the archive already?

Finally got round to reading this, and I'm hooked!

view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Aug 2015, 3:49 PM

HeSerpenty

Aaah thank you so much!! I'm SO happy you enjoyed it!! <33
Day is made now <33

view Calisa's profile

28th Aug 2015, 11:51 PM

Calisa

*huuuuugs* I didn't see the WIP version but this page turned out great Serpy :) <33

view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Aug 2015, 1:15 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you!! Lol.. I went through heckbut.. *shrugs* It's over at least!

view CiciEnixa's profile

6th Sep 2015, 8:46 PM

CiciEnixa

Merlock I swear if you hurt Gwynn I will hurt you SO BAD that nobody will recognize you D:<

view HeSerpenty's profile

7th Sep 2015, 11:54 AM

HeSerpenty

It's true Merlock!!! Just go look over at her comic what she did to her very own main character >__>
She actually has probably maybe a little bit of love for HIM so I'd hate to think what will happen to you, Merlock O__O;;;


LololoL Ciiciiiii!!!! <333

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