Chapter 4.5-- Damn Kid

posted 14th Aug 2015, 12:18 PM

Chapter 4.5-- Damn Kid

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view HeSerpenty's profile

14th Aug 2015, 12:18 PM

HeSerpenty

What's with those bars? O yea... that's when Hizruk did this

And what does Merek mean by the Council was wrong? Refer to this moment from waaay back in chapter 1
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MY GOSH. THIS almost killed me.. having to do this page TWICE -__-. Like... I haven't even started getting ready for work yet sooo I'm in a huge rush but...
THANK YOU GUYS sooo much for all your encouraging words last week and thank you for your patience! I hope you know how much you all mean to me and how passionate I am about getting this story out to you <3. You guys are seriously.... you have such a place in my heart <3

SOME day.. I'll have proper and reliable equipment where I can get pages out faster aaand not have to REDO them -__-

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14th Aug 2015, 12:19 PM

HeSerpenty

I got a few new fan arts by some very talented people over the last couple of weeks!! They've kept me motivated during a time I was sooo unmotivated--- THANK you all so much!!

Click on the images to see it full size and hear just what I think about them!!

First ever fan art of Kalverick by Ten Penny Officer
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Hizruk by azureXtwilight
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Merek Crossover by ProfEtheric
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ALSO please welcome two new characters to the Serpents of Old family! Cyrus and Sonya <3 created by Zartala
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view junoro's profile

14th Aug 2015, 12:26 PM

junoro

I'm so glad you were able to get out without something else crapping out on you! I love the name of this page. And I love Merek's reaction to all this in general!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Aug 2015, 4:27 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much! Omg me too T__T... Like i think if I had to do this page a third time I mighta just drove off a cliff or something hahaha. FOR REAAL
Lolol that title seemed fitting all the way around for this page XDD

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view Alicia's profile

14th Aug 2015, 12:34 PM

Alicia

Aw, lookit Barron and Ryder. They CARE! <3

And lookit Merek bein' all wet. *_* I approve of wet, manly Merek! <3 >_> lolol

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16th Aug 2015, 4:27 PM

HeSerpenty

THEY DO CARE!! They good fellas!

LOL I'm glad you approve! THATSWHATILIVEFOR XDDD

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view LeRenardRoux's profile

14th Aug 2015, 12:34 PM

LeRenardRoux

I've gotta say, if I lost a whole page I'd be really inclined to slack off in replacing it. But this page is GORGEOUS and looks as good as any of your other pages. ^_^ Wonderful work, dearie!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Aug 2015, 4:28 PM

HeSerpenty

Aww Roux thank you so much! It devastated me to miss an update last week..aaand pushed me to the near break of my patience to redo it completely lol..... buut I'm so glad its over. Thank you so much for the compliments!! <333

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view TheD-Wrek's profile

14th Aug 2015, 12:46 PM

TheD-Wrek

*ding!* *ding!* *ding!* Mereeeeek, dinner is ready ~

Beautiful page Serp. Well worth the effort. And thanks again for helping me with my stuff. :)

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view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Aug 2015, 4:29 PM

HeSerpenty

DON'TYOUMEANBREAKFAST >__>

Lolol thanks D!! I'm glad it paid off I truly am! (and you're welcome! Any tiiime!)

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view TheD-Wrek's profile

16th Aug 2015, 5:08 PM

TheD-Wrek

It's always dinner time, Serp. ALWAYS. O_O

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:D

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view lirvilas's profile

14th Aug 2015, 12:52 PM

lirvilas

That "ding" is the sound of the referee's bell after a hard round in the ring where you took a haymaker to the face that knocked you down to your knees when you lost the page. But you got up, shook it off, and made that page again. Art-wise, I wouldn't say that "Chapter 4.5--Damn Kid" is anything special compared to your other pages... but heart-wise it is the work of a champion.

"Ding Ding" indeed. Keep fighting!

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16th Aug 2015, 4:31 PM

HeSerpenty

<:')
Aw lirvilas thank you so much! I really felt like what happened last wek pretty much was a knock out shot that's for sure lol... but I'm suuper happy to have suffered through redoing this page and I can now move forward with my life!
I do admit tho it was reeally rushed at the end art-wise. A good lesson in perseverance for sure! Thank you so much for all your support! Seriously, you are wonderful <3

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view zartala's profile

14th Aug 2015, 1:02 PM

zartala

That dinging can't be good. Do serpents have a dog equivalent they use to track escapees? Have they ever had an escape before?

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view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Aug 2015, 4:33 PM

HeSerpenty

Nooo it can't be too good at all!

Well teechnically...Serpents THEMSELVES have those "track dog" type capabilities. The problem is (which i suppose isn't aproblem for THIS situation XDD)..serpents have become so humanized their natural senses have been dulled! And escapes are uh.... VERY uncommon lolol

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view revzet's profile

14th Aug 2015, 1:22 PM

revzet

Love that water :0. And that dinging can't be good nooooo.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Aug 2015, 4:34 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you!!
Yes it would seem the hunt is officially ON now D:

(Ps thank you again so much for your offers to help last week! I woulda taken ya up on it if my methods of which I do these pages weren't so messed up and confusing lolol)

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view Centcomm's profile

14th Aug 2015, 2:03 PM

Centcomm

Yay page! this is awesome .. I really like Merek ..

and yay on getting page done!
and take your time .. we will be here!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Aug 2015, 4:34 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you Centy! I'm so glad <333

I'm SO GLAD THIS PAGE IS dONE omg XDDD

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view alston123's profile

14th Aug 2015, 2:39 PM

alston123

Whoa. This realizations is kinda scary. How could the council not have figured out that he is stronger than the normal serpents? Man, this is getting crazy...I LOVE IT!!!!! :D

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view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Aug 2015, 4:36 PM

HeSerpenty

Heheheh that is what Merek is wondering too! Either Hizruk had a spot-on instinct and remarkable ability to hide this trait about himself oooooorrrr the Council knows, they are just...scheming something. It could possibly be a little of both XDD. NO ONE KNOWS! :3

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! <333

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view DLKmusic's profile

14th Aug 2015, 5:13 PM

DLKmusic

was that an alarm Merek just set off?

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view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Aug 2015, 4:36 PM

HeSerpenty

Weeelllll it's an alarm alright but not exactly one he set off :3
It shall be explained in the very first panel of next page tho!! That's a promise :D

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view rufiangel's profile

14th Aug 2015, 6:45 PM

rufiangel

Congratulations on finishing this page that was so dastardly, Serpy-kins!! *hug* <3 Man this looks like a horrible page to have to do twice, I really really feel for you! ;3;* <3 It looks really good though Serpy, well done!

Gosh, everything gets mysteriouser and mysteriouser. What the heck is Hizruk-baby? ;3;* And Merek...as hawt as you look with wet hair... GET YOUR BUTT BACK THERE before you get into trouble (again)!! ;w;*

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view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Aug 2015, 4:43 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you Rufi! It was.. it really was T__T

I don't even think Hizruk knows what Hizruk is! But one thing is certain... he's no ordinary serpent that's for sure!

LOL yea Merek! things just got real its time to stop playing in the river! X))

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view MST3KFan's profile

15th Aug 2015, 2:57 AM

MST3KFan

Congratulations, Merek! You just won "Make an Assumption"! Tell him what he's won, Bob!

Heh. Seriously though, great work HeSerpenty, I'm glad you were able to get this awesome page out there even if it had to be done twice. That just means it's TWICE as nice. XD

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view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Aug 2015, 4:44 PM

HeSerpenty

Awww thanks man!! I really appreciate that <3

As much as I hate redoing things I've already done.. in the end of the day its well worth the effort! You guys are my inspiration!

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view Jarvi's profile

15th Aug 2015, 10:45 PM

Jarvi

Awww.. that's a lot to lose :< but.. it's done now! Yays!
And wow Hizruk is strong, and the council is probably trying to get people's approval to lock him for good or something? :o
Me no like >:( Hands away from Hizzy!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Aug 2015, 4:45 PM

HeSerpenty

Yess it's done! I'm SO HAPPY ITS DONE XDD

The Council sure is up to SOMEthng! that much I can give away :D :D lolol

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view Matt Knab's profile

16th Aug 2015, 3:02 AM

Matt Knab

Merek is a man on a mission. Bad ass.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Aug 2015, 4:45 PM

HeSerpenty

That he is!! Mr. FOCUSED :D

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view Skweeee's profile

16th Aug 2015, 6:39 AM

Skweeee

HeSerpenty!!!!

This page is ridiculously good. I'm actually embarrassed at my own lack of effort when I read your comments and look at the quality of your work. I am very impressed with your work ethic. It truly comes through in your comments and beautiful artwork. Don't worry about being late. We are all reading this for free, so I suspect everyone understands the need to include real life in your daily routines. Besides, I am the worst at keeping and maintaining a steady schedule, and consistent quality of work.

Very well done!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Aug 2015, 5:00 PM

HeSerpenty

Omg Squeeee! You made my day so much ya don't even know <33
That compliment is so dear to my heart.... thank you!! I had a big smile on my face all day from that <:'D

You guys are all my biggest inspiration and motivation to keep going! Such positive feedback from artists I respect and admire are such a treasure <333
thank you again so much <333

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view gideonland's profile

17th Aug 2015, 1:40 AM

gideonland

Glad to see the page! I bet you feel much better now that it's up, and it looks awesome, btw.
Glad to see this is why Merek was missing, covering up his nephew's nightly activities. Merek is a good unc to have, but I sense there's going to be more and a lot of this cleaning up after Hizruk.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Aug 2015, 1:01 PM

HeSerpenty

Omg you have no iDEA how much better I feel lolol. And thank you!!

Yes too bad we ALL don't have uncles like Merek!! I hope he doesn't get himself into too much trouble tho XDDD

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view azureXtwilight's profile

17th Aug 2015, 6:52 AM

azureXtwilight

First you drew a wet Hizruk and now a wet Merek.

Thanks for the fanservicey! X33333

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Aug 2015, 1:01 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL

Myyy pleasure? Hehehe I'm glad you're enjoying my river scenes!! ;3 lolol

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view Solid Snack's profile

17th Aug 2015, 5:47 PM

Solid Snack

Oh man. These are some handsome looking snake men. Love the style you got.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Aug 2015, 1:02 PM

HeSerpenty

Heheheh aww thank you so much!!!! That means a lot <3 (andthankyouforthesub!!!!ThatmeansevenMORE!:D)

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