Chapter 3.32-- WAKE UP

posted 22nd Apr 2015, 5:37 PM

Chapter 3.32-- WAKE UP
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22nd Apr 2015, 5:37 PM

HeSerpenty

HIZRUK! D:
You get -50 points for knocking out the damsel in distress!
Egads what's this? Does Hizruk's sneaky serpent friend have the SAME SCAR as Hizruk? HMM >__>. Peculiar. Looks like sneaky-serpent is trying to lead him somewhere maybe.
How do y'allz think Shera is gonna react to red-eye Hizzy? (who is a LOT calmer, yes? ^__^)
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Got a new fan art in the gallery this week! By the lovely Damatris <3. You should go look at it! :D

Merek by Damatris
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Soo next week's page MIGHT be late cuuz like.. in about an hour I'm driving like... 10 hours to northern CA (I'm not even packed yet--STUPID PAGE D:) aand I won't be comin' back til Monday.I'm bringin the computer tho in hopes of being able to work on it so who knows what'll happen! :D
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ALSO! We'll see how many people read the author comment x'D. Do any of you lovely people have characters that would hang out in a bar if they had the chance? Ya see.. Hoak's Barn n Inn (where Merek lives) needs regulars aaand instead of tryin to draw a buncha random people I thought it'd be a GREAT place for cameos! What say you?? Anyone? Just tell me the name of the character and post a link to him or her! :D


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22nd Apr 2015, 5:55 PM

HeSerpenty


view Alicia's profile

22nd Apr 2015, 6:12 PM

Alicia

Poor girl... Now THAT is what I would call a rough day! D:

IWANTTOSEETHISMYSTERIOUSSERPENTINHUMANFORMSERPYOMGWHEN?! >_>;

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Apr 2015, 6:13 PM

HeSerpenty

Yea she's had a REALLY bad day so far X'D
Probably won't get any better next page lolol

LolololI'mnotsurexactlywhenbutIwouldn'tminditbeingsoonerratherthanlater!!lol:D:D

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22nd Apr 2015, 6:25 PM

Bethany-sensei

Yooooooo, Michael hangs out in bars quite a bit. :D

Here he is in my comic:
http://outside-in.thecomicseries.com/comics/39

And here in color:
http://bethany-sensei.deviantart.com/art/Michael-tea-505769386

Can't wait to see more. :)

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Apr 2015, 6:16 PM

HeSerpenty

AWEsome!! I like him lots :D
He will make a lovely bar regular <3 (I forgot to mention this in the author comments but I'd have to "serpentify" him a liiittle bit, I hope ya don't mind! Basically I just make their eyes black and give them fangs :P)

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23rd Apr 2015, 6:22 PM

Bethany-sensei

That amuses me more than I can say. ;p

view MST3KFan's profile

22nd Apr 2015, 7:31 PM

MST3KFan

No Hizruk! You don't STRIKE the girl, you SAVE her. Yeesh. Definitely losing her trust with each no predicament you bring to the table.

And if you want, I already mentioned allowed use of any characters from my comic POW! Right in the Nostalgia some time ago as I recall for any backgrounds you need filled in. XD

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23rd Apr 2015, 6:17 PM

HeSerpenty

Yeees he definitely is XD. I don't imagine next page he'll be building it up anymore XD. ITS THE THOUGHT THAT COUNTS... right? XD
He MEANT to be a good hero x'D

Yess I'd love to use any of em! Is there one in particular more likely to hang out in a bar? :D :D

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22nd Apr 2015, 7:45 PM

Slim Kittens

It's Hizruk's evil twin!

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Apr 2015, 6:18 PM

HeSerpenty

lolol PERHAPS!! :D

view Sleeper's profile

22nd Apr 2015, 8:30 PM

Sleeper

Wat.

Amazing page!

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23rd Apr 2015, 6:18 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks so much!
Peculiar thingsss :3

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22nd Apr 2015, 9:20 PM

Ana Karenina

Nice page, but Hizruk you're not supposed to do that!! haha
And you can use Serena http://softbluewind.deviantart.com/art/Serena-528031590
: D She's a friendly warrior who often gets mad easily haha

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Apr 2015, 6:20 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you! Lol he's new at this whole... "saving" thing X'D

Oooh she's cool!! I havta tell everyone this cuz I forgot to say it in the author comments... But I'll just havta serpentify her a lil bit! Basically just give her black eyes and fangs :P. She'll still be recognizable of course! :D

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22nd Apr 2015, 10:43 PM

DLKmusic

I'm not sure how to rate this comic (5, btw)... On one hand, it's an entirely human reaction, but on the other, that's NOT how you pull yourself together young man! now apologize, get her out of there, then apologize again!

(kids these days, Sheeez)

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23rd Apr 2015, 6:22 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol yes.. .aand Shera grabbed the wrong shoulder! The pain and the panic all worked together to make Hizruk do somethin he would NOT have done in his right mind XD. Dang reflexes

He'll... get better at this! Hopefully... (lol)

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25th Apr 2015, 11:41 PM

DLKmusic

BTW, Serpy, I'm not an artist, and I don't have any character sketches to nominate as bar patrons....

but shouldn't every bar have an older guy with glasses playing the piano in the background?

view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Apr 2015, 2:03 AM

HeSerpenty

Omg I LOVE that idea lololol-- consider it done!
So should I reference that avatar of yours? ;D

view DLKmusic's profile

27th Apr 2015, 5:34 PM

DLKmusic

Absolutely, I would love to see how I wind up looking as half serpent!

And... I would be honored if you did!

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23rd Apr 2015, 2:41 AM

mjkj

Awww... He hit her - which was expected in his current state of mind - though he seems like a split personality?

...and author notes? who reads author notes? XD

...sorry no - I do not have any characters - not even some that hang out in a bar - but I vote for Cici's and Rufi's characters ;)

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23rd Apr 2015, 6:27 PM

HeSerpenty

Indeed, I think his reflexes got the best of this situation XD. It does seem rather split! But red-eye Hizzy seems to be the one that pulls through and finishes the rescue attempts so far X'D-- he's the true hero! Lolol

You know what's funny! X'D.... image This handsome devil, Kyle, was a character for SoO created BY Rufi (I let people create OCs for Serpents) who was inspired originally as a male version of Kylie X'D. I love him so much and he will be in the bar and the comic rather frequently! :D

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28th Apr 2015, 9:17 AM

TheMentalist

Aye, She does do good work.

Sadly, my artist level is pretty low. Otherwise I have a slew of fun characters that would work for your needs. If you want descriptions, I would gladly offer them and allow you some... artistic license to draw them. Not quite as nice as just having them drawn, but it is one possibility.

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28th Apr 2015, 10:47 AM

HeSerpenty

Aww artistic level matters not! ^__^
As long as I have any visual reference for the character.. any at all.. it will be easy for me to cameo them in the comic! If there are no visual references tho I suppose you can try to describe them and I'd do my best X'D-- but I thought this would be a fun way to get people excited :D

Let me know! :D

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23rd Apr 2015, 4:09 AM

rufiangel

Wow Serpy, this is exciting - we finally get to see the dark!Hizruk-baby in action O_O but dang... he totally hurt Shera there, poor Shera! D: She must be really confused ;w; (she's probably gonna FREAK OUT at dark!Hizruk XD;;;)

Have a safe trip and fun time away, Serpy! :D <3

(I'll second Mjkj's nomination-vote for Cici's characters XD <3 Kyle would be very confused to see Kylie in the bar there so probably not a good idea to cross proton streams if you know what I mean ;D)

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23rd Apr 2015, 6:31 PM

HeSerpenty

I'm always excited for the red-eye Hizzy part of the chapter! (so far in both rescue attempts... its Red-Eye Hizzy pulling through in the end and finishing it XD. Look at me all talkin like he's a different character or something XD). Yea she's had a day from Hell and I'm SURE she's confused X'D. (You're probably right lolol..she is >__>)

I almost died but I'm safe and sound at my destination now! Just gotta do it all again on sunday X'D

Oooh yes Kyle will be in the comic rather frequently I'd say! :D (which of Cici's characters would hang out in a baar thoo..hmmm lolol)

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30th Apr 2015, 1:02 AM

CiciEnixa

The only characters so far who would have access to a bar are the guards, so... well, why the heck not, you can do Levon if you want, Serpy XD He's the Captain of the Guard, the one with the blue cape thing.

view Zor15's profile

23rd Apr 2015, 5:41 AM

Zor15

I winder where its going to lead them. Good luck driving all that way.

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Apr 2015, 6:32 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you! I made it safe and sound minus almost dying quite a few times on the way X'D

Hopefully it leads then... out of the dungeon XD. Hopefully..

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23rd Apr 2015, 9:18 AM

TheD-Wrek

Oh, no! Hizzy! I- hmmm... yes, I'm going with evil twin brother as well...Kurzih! lol

Oh? I think I'll go with Cass and her lobster as extras? I'll link to them when I get home if ya need em. ;)

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Apr 2015, 6:33 PM

HeSerpenty

Kurzhih, huh? Lolol is that your FINAL ANSWER? :3

Sure thing! I'll just have to Serpentify them a bit as long as ya don't mind! (Basically I'll just give em'black eyes and fangs XD)

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24th Apr 2015, 12:14 PM

TheD-Wrek

Yes. It's wrong but the best I can do atm, lol. I'm gonna feel so dumb when the reveal happens and it's someone I should have seen coming. X)

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23rd Apr 2015, 11:22 AM

LeRenardRoux

HIZRUK. BAD. He's going to have to do some serious apologizing omgosh so bad.

Speaking of bad, I feel like Remus is the kind of guy who'd hang out at a bar. If they'd let him in. >.>

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Apr 2015, 6:35 PM

HeSerpenty

*squirts Hizruk with a water spray bottle D:*... Hopefully apologies will cut it! I don't see her reaction to red-eye Hizzy being a terribly good one tho D:

OOOO yes! Remmy will be a LOVELY bar cameo <33 (I gotta Serpentify him a lil bit if ya don't mind! Pretty much just give him black eyes :P)

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24th Apr 2015, 2:57 AM

LeRenardRoux

lol the spray bottle XD

YES that would be fine!! (I love how you had to mention fangs for other people but not him... oh and you can lose the tail of course!! No serpents with fluffy white tails lol)

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23rd Apr 2015, 12:22 PM

Rinkel

Oh man oh man oh man ohmanohmanohman oh geez ohhh myyyyy gooooooooooooood 0.0

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23rd Apr 2015, 6:35 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol I knooow T__T

Somethin tells me things aren't gonna get all that better next page X'D

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23rd Apr 2015, 1:11 PM

Tantz Aerine

That's not going to earn him much gratitude.

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Apr 2015, 6:58 PM

HeSerpenty

You're dang right about THAT lolol X'D

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23rd Apr 2015, 1:17 PM

Matt Knab

Face-palm.
Hizruk just rolled a 4 on his charisma check...

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23rd Apr 2015, 6:58 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol BIG time X"D
Friggen Hizruk :P

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23rd Apr 2015, 3:23 PM

Centcomm

... Really ... REALLY! ... GRRR BAD HERO nooo cookie!!

(( great page though :D ))

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Apr 2015, 6:59 PM

HeSerpenty

No kidding! *takes away ALL of Hizruk's cookies D:*

(thank you! :D)

view BlueDragon's profile

23rd Apr 2015, 5:52 PM

BlueDragon

Wow! Automatic reflex :( That's gotta hurt!

If you're still looking for bar wenches, you can throw Rhina in there (though, for the time being she's underage :P )

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Apr 2015, 7:00 PM

HeSerpenty

Yes, exactly T__T. That might just leave a mark lolol (A permanent one, I mean :P)

Yes of course! Do ya have a link to her? :D

view BlueDragon's profile

23rd Apr 2015, 8:48 PM

BlueDragon

Cool beans :) Dudes dig scars ;) (oh, wait, did I mess that up?)

http://darkhorse.webcomic.ws/Characters/
She's the second one, or further down I did that 25 emotions thing, all her.

Thanks! And keep it coming :D I'm really enjoying your comic!!! (but I've said that before :3 )

view HapyCow's profile

24th Apr 2015, 11:29 AM

HapyCow

Aaaaah!! :o that's really all I have to say this week, lol I'm just shocked that he hit her. Also what, why does that serpent have an identical scar omgggg what is happeninggggggg!!!!

view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Apr 2015, 10:15 AM

HeSerpenty

I know!! Not only did he hit her but he straight up knocked her out! Lolol

Very peculiar that scar, Hehe :D

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24th Apr 2015, 4:58 PM

Confettirainbowpony

Pardon me, madam, i believe there has been a mistake. I do not believe this is the warm and fuzzy homecoming page we had agreed upon. O______O but now we might get to find out more about the lizard guy and red-eye hizzy sooooooo.... Yay? \(^O^)/ Yes! Yay!!

view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Apr 2015, 10:19 AM

HeSerpenty

O shoot! We shoulda gotten it in writing D: lolol
Hey at least red eye Hizzy is the one that seems able to see these rescue attempts through <:D. So, um... things are looking. .. up? Hehe he :D

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24th Apr 2015, 6:26 PM

Skweeee

Is he the only one who can see it???


Plus, I cringed seeing the panel with the elbow to the face.. Eeeesh! Not cool.

view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Apr 2015, 1:56 AM

HeSerpenty

That is a good question!I mean.... maybe its all in HIzzy's head or maybe sneaky-serpent knows how to only be seen when he wants to be BY whom he wants. No one knows for sure! D:

Lolol I'm glad to know that panel had its desired effect! :D

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25th Apr 2015, 12:59 AM

Damatris

Whoaa! Things are getting really exciting here! :o Red eyed Hizzy! And his hallucination-serpent form-self? :OO

I feel bad for her. She couldn't have know that she was grabbing injured shoulder and that Hizruk's instics would kick in like that. :<

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27th Apr 2015, 1:57 AM

HeSerpenty

A lot of people are wondering now if this serpent is really Hizruk's subconcscious-- now wouldn't THAT be somethin >__>
Things are indeed picking up a bit!

Yea poor Shera has had THE WORST day so far X'D

view Jarvi's profile

25th Apr 2015, 10:07 AM

Jarvi

Is it him? :O It can't be him.. what's going on? :<

Also.. darn Hizruk, that's not how you help damsels in distress!

view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Apr 2015, 1:59 AM

HeSerpenty

no one can say for sure :3.. I guess we'll havta wait and seeee! :D

He needs to sign up for damsel rescue 101 X'D-- he's pretty bad at this so far!

view Jarvi's profile

27th Apr 2015, 8:28 AM

Jarvi

I don't know where could he take this damsel rescue 101 .>___>. For sure not with Daggot or Kalverick .>..>.

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25th Apr 2015, 12:25 PM

Proxy170

Oh my gosh...this page is so intense! Seeing them meet eye to eye...I'm reaaalllyy curious to find out if the serpent is truly another entity or perhaps just a visual representation made by Hizruk's mind. People can make "imaginary friends" in times of great stress...being stuck in a dungeon certainly is a reason for stress!

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27th Apr 2015, 2:01 AM

HeSerpenty

You're absolutely right about that! The imaginary thing part... and Hizruk would be a prime candidate of that for sure! He's obviously traumatized :(

Indeed this IS the first time that this mysterious serpent fully revealed itself to Hizruk.Now to figure out if he's not all in Hizzy's head or not.. >__>

(I was super excited for this part of the chapter for a long time :D)

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