Chapter 3.23-- You're a Serpent

posted 18th Feb 2015, 9:43 PM

Chapter 3.23-- You're a Serpent
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view HeSerpenty's profile

18th Feb 2015, 9:43 PM

HeSerpenty

Ooohh so it looks like it wasn't HER blood out in that hallway. Can anyone guess what Hizruk's next line is gonna be?? I'll give you 50 imaginary gold coins if you can guess it XD
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MAN it stinks this page is late, buut alas. It happens XD. GUys thank you SOOOOOO much for all the kind comments and PMs-- it really touched my heart that when I was feelin down for a day, so many people cared <3. I'm gonna try my darndest to have the NEXT page done on the day it is supposed to be... which is Monday ^___^

See you then, guys! I'm excited about the whole rest of this chapter! :D (SO excited :DD)


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18th Feb 2015, 10:00 PM

TheD-Wrek

Oh, thank goodness she's safe. And looking rather cute at that. :D

Hmm, how about... "...but I'm not one of THEM." for a normal answer... and just because there has to be one that isn't!

"I may be a Serpent... but I love scotch. Scotchy scotch scotch. Here it goes down, down into my belly."

Glad you're feelin better, Serpy. :)

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19th Feb 2015, 8:33 PM

HeSerpenty

*starts to give D all the gold coins obutwaithesaidmore so only gives half XDDD* ;D

Yup it wasn't HER blood! So she's..PHYSICALLY okay at least! >__> XD

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19th Feb 2015, 8:34 PM

TheD-Wrek

So he does love scotch! I knew it! :D

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18th Feb 2015, 10:02 PM

CiciEnixa

I saw the page title and was like, "You're a wizard, Harry". In this case, "You're a serpent, Hizzy." XD

But yay, Shera's fine! Hizruk's next line... "I may be a serpent, but I'm not a monster." Maybe. Something like that. Or he's a wizard. That's totally possible, too, he has a scar and everything XD

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19th Feb 2015, 8:41 PM

HeSerpenty

Lololol...if I followed Harry Potter more I prolly woulda made that connection too!

Hehe that's not exactly the line but it definitely applies! <33 XD

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20th Feb 2015, 12:47 PM

TheD-Wrek

@Cici- Lol, omg... this. XD

view Alicia's profile

18th Feb 2015, 10:07 PM

Alicia

I absolutely love the facial expressions on this page, Serpy! The colors... and the way you render hair... everything is just so perdy! *.*

And seriously, Shera? A "Thank you" would be nice! D:

view HeSerpenty's profile

20th Feb 2015, 11:10 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much! I was so excited for this page!! (As you know XD)

And yea seriously XDD-- just you wait! lol

view HapyCow's profile

18th Feb 2015, 10:13 PM

HapyCow

Ah I like her face :) She looks very...unharmed! Wow, that's odd..considering how male dominated the society is..there must be something very strange going on. *rubs chin*

view HeSerpenty's profile

20th Feb 2015, 11:11 AM

HeSerpenty

Lol yes.....so far so good! >__>

Physically she does seem quite alright! I wonder what the Council's plans were D:

24th Feb 2015, 4:20 AM

Tre

EVIL! The answer is obvious! XD

But yeah, the dialogue does make what kind of evil rather obvious. There are just some acts that if you want to show how evil someone is you gotta at least hint at.

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18th Feb 2015, 10:33 PM

rufiangel

Whose blood was it then?!?!? =__=;; GAH I'M SO CURIOUS!!!

Love the backgrounds so much Serps, you're so good at this!!

Hmm... bedrooms... THIS IS KALVERICK'S PLAYROOM?! *gets shot*

Okay I'll stop. XD; Aww, Shera is so pretty ;_; so sad she's sad... the way you did her tears look beautiful~~ (I love her hair, it's soooo fluffy ;w;* and that colour <3)

Hizruk-baby, you are like the most dressed down knight in shining armour ever and I love you. <333 (those last two panels are like, so nicely drawn Serpy-kins <33)

"I may be a serpent... BUT I'M A DAMN GOOD LOOKING ONE!"

... what that's not it? are you sure? >_>

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20th Feb 2015, 11:14 AM

HeSerpenty

Hehe I promise you will get those answers on the NEXT page ;D.

Thank you so much! I dread the backgrounds on every page, so it's really nice to hear it pays off!
Haha EEW Kal's playroom LOL XDD... <__<

Lolol <33333..... yes he definitely lacks that "shining armor" bit, doesn't he?? Thank you so much <333... your comments so great <:'D

LOl! *gives Rufi gold coins anyway cuz she made me laugh XDD* <33

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18th Feb 2015, 10:35 PM

Centcomm

YESS YES YES ~! GOOOO get her out of there !! !!! AHHH! (( excellent break point in the dialogue - also really nice job on this and the past pages - stepping up your game eh ? ))

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20th Feb 2015, 11:15 AM

HeSerpenty

Thanks so much, Centy! I'm ALways lookin to step up my game! Sooo happy to hear that its maybe possibly working! :D

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19th Feb 2015, 5:21 AM

MST3KFan

I just finished running through all the pages of the comic yesterday and was pumped to see the next page...and here it is! XD

I was anxious to see how things continue. I have to wonder now if Shera will play a big part in the story beyond her rescuing.

As for a guess on what Hizruk says... "I may be a serpent...but I'm a human at heart."

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20th Feb 2015, 11:18 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much! I'm really happy to hear that you're enjoying the story so far <33

Lol well I can't give too much away! But you could be right about Shera ;D..... you really could be right :D

And that's a really good guess! I love how everyone's guesses, whether right or wrong...all hold at least a little bit of truth to it! <3

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19th Feb 2015, 1:29 PM

DLKmusic

How about... "I may be a serpent, but I like smooth jazz, ice cream, and romantic moonlight walks along the beach"?

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20th Feb 2015, 11:30 AM

HeSerpenty

Lol!! If thats it, then it sounds like they're gonna have a pleasant evening together! XD

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19th Feb 2015, 1:32 PM

Matt Knab

I may be a serpent...but I'm not a snake! ;D

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19th Feb 2015, 4:21 PM

JayyLyn

If hizzy remembers the doors but the interior is unfamiliar, does that mean the fancy renovations are recent? :O for what purpose, I wonder... ̄ε  ̄ Also..all of this seems a bit toO easy...could the next line be "EGADS!!" XD
Really glad you're feeling better, Serpy! <3
I hope my horrible fan arts gave you something to chuckle at when you were feeling blue! ^_^ Lol!

view HeSerpenty's profile

20th Feb 2015, 11:32 AM

HeSerpenty

Well he remembers the doors but he's only ever walked by them... never went through em!
Lolol but yes...things definitely seem "too easy" so far-- I don't think it'll be as easy to GET OUT O__o (which is the most important part!) XDD

Ummm horrible fan arts? I never got any of those >__> (JUST FANTASTIC ONES! lolol..that indeed made me chuckle XDD)

view Skweeee's profile

19th Feb 2015, 4:26 PM

Skweeee

Oh I'm too worried to feel any sense of victory at this moment.

view HeSerpenty's profile

20th Feb 2015, 11:33 AM

HeSerpenty

I hear ya O__O
Things are NEVER this easy!

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19th Feb 2015, 4:59 PM

Ninabird

Matt Knab's answer is pretty good. How about: "I may be a serpent but I'm not one of *them*."

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20th Feb 2015, 11:34 AM

HeSerpenty

Hehe..

*quietly slips Ninabird all da gold coins* >___>

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21st Feb 2015, 11:37 AM

Ninabird

I'm imaginary-rich! Muhahaha! Yesssss.

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20th Feb 2015, 8:20 PM

Slim Kittens

"I may be a serpent, but I just saved 15% on my car insurance."

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23rd Feb 2015, 6:32 PM

HeSerpenty

Dang! How'd u guess??

Lol well.. I suppose EVERYONE does know that >___>;

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21st Feb 2015, 6:06 AM

LeRenardRoux

Wh-ok-but-how do you do hair, because her hair is AMAZING here. :O

I can't think of anything clever but the phrase "you're a serpent" makes me think of the Sea Wolf song "You're a Wolf" which... I totally don't listen to a lot. >.>

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Feb 2015, 6:34 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks Roux!! I do try <33

Lolol well now I'm curious to listen to that song!

view Jarvi's profile

21st Feb 2015, 2:35 PM

Jarvi

Oh wow.. I just clicked back to the first page to look at her, and now here.. wow YOU MADE PROGRESS GIRL :]

She's pretty :3 And very much alive :)
I also wonder what's up with those Cells.. We'll see.....

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Feb 2015, 6:39 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks dad!! Its always nice to hear when it's getting BETTER :3 (I kinda shudder at those old pages T__T)

We SHALL see! Eventually...

view Jarvi's profile

24th Feb 2015, 12:29 AM

Jarvi

I do the same with mine, don't worry ;)

view Proxy170's profile

21st Feb 2015, 8:02 PM

Proxy170

Hmmm...what ARE they doing in those dungeons??? I also wanna know who took out the guards ahead of time...Hizzy's guardian serpent strikes again? >.>

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22nd Feb 2015, 4:37 PM

Spelledeg

Serpyyy this page is gorgeous~ like a few others have said this is reallly up-gamed. You've mega improved in this chapter alone :D! (Soprettyeverything)

As for Shera in the newly remodeled previously torture chamber*...my mind kind of automatically goes to the worst since those snakeballs are so scummy in the council >>...this is too easy though. I kind of have a feel-- A STRONG FEEL- that they're just waiting for Hiz to slip up.

I DON'T WANT TO BE RIGHT. D:


*ATLA reference

view severin's profile

25th Feb 2015, 10:03 PM

severin

"Aren't you a little short for a storm trooper?" (sorry I couldn't resist xD)

These pages are just getting more and more great Serpy! :D

view HeSerpenty's profile

25th Feb 2015, 11:19 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol!! That's a good one XDD *gives Dad gold coins even tho NOPE* lolol

Thank you so much! <33

25th Mar 2015, 8:34 PM

RandomCitizen

Making her settled see! Get some brain washing going next?

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