Chapter 3.20-- What Luck

posted 26th Jan 2015, 2:08 PM

Chapter 3.20-- What Luck

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Jan 2015, 2:08 PM

HeSerpenty

Fun Fact: For those of you wondering why the heck Daggot is here, he is actually the Council's head scribe and is the overseer in the writing of all the new--Egads!-- history books and of course re-writing the old ones. So more often than not he ends up falling asleep in the Official building-- but don't feel bad for him, he seems to have made himself QUITE at home XD.

Hizruk don't let your guard down just cuz things are starting off well!
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I friggen hate this page you guys. *sighs* which is a shame cuz I was looking forward to the little joke up there for a while XD. I hope you enjoy it anyway. I have a lot going on and the poor page suffered for it QAQ
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Oh btw! I uploaded a new fan art to the site. Be sure to check it out!
HIZRUK'S NEW YEARS DATE by THED-WREK

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view TheD-Wrek's profile

26th Jan 2015, 2:21 PM

TheD-Wrek

OMG... DAT ass... X_X *dies*... Poor Hizzy!!! lol. Nice one Serp. Page looks amazing. ;3

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Jan 2015, 3:04 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol.. gotta get that fan service in SOMEwhere, amiright??? XDD

Thanks D! I need to hear with this one cuz maaan did I struggle XD

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view TheD-Wrek's profile

26th Jan 2015, 3:08 PM

TheD-Wrek

Yes, but.... why hiiiiim. XD

Sorry to hear that you struggled but everything looks great. Especially the expressions. Hizzy looks like he's in total shock there. XD

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view Calisa's profile

27th Jan 2015, 7:38 PM

Calisa

I agree with D, why hiiiiiim, Serpy, whyyyyyy xDD

Hizzy, however, looks great this page :D <3

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Jan 2015, 11:46 AM

HeSerpenty

I think the true question is, Kara.... how could it NOT be him? LOL

Thank you so much! :D

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view Sleeper's profile

26th Jan 2015, 2:21 PM

Sleeper

The page looks great! I loled at frame 9

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Jan 2015, 3:04 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol good!! Then it did exactly what it was supposed to do XD

Thanks so much!

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view Vivocateur's profile

26th Jan 2015, 2:26 PM

Vivocateur

Uuuuuuuuugh.... XD

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Jan 2015, 3:05 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol yea I'm sure we're all thinking that XDD

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view Skweeee's profile

26th Jan 2015, 3:21 PM

Skweeee

I'm sorry that this page did not meet your expectations. Me? I love it. 'sides, that's not a bad bum for a scribe.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Jan 2015, 9:11 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much! I'm really REALLY happy to hear it :)

LOL! It must be all that clenching XDD

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view HapyCow's profile

26th Jan 2015, 3:37 PM

HapyCow

Awww why do you hate it?! It turned out great!! :D Come on, you can't hate a page with man thong on it ;) <3333

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Jan 2015, 9:12 PM

HeSerpenty

I suppose I may have spent too many hours at once on it right before submission...therefore judged it extra harshly XDD

Lololol that is true, I mean... gotta get that fan service in XD

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view CiciEnixa's profile

26th Jan 2015, 3:42 PM

CiciEnixa

Welp, there goes the last of my brain bleach -_- Thanks a lot, Serpy.

Nah but really, this is amazing, Serpy XD

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Jan 2015, 9:13 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks Cici! I'm sorry abou that brain bleach tho XD

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view Alicia's profile

26th Jan 2015, 5:00 PM

Alicia

So. Much. Love. FOR DIS PAGE! <3 :D

Ha ha! It is a really nice moment, Serpy. And the humor softens the serious story that has been going on as of late. I truly love this! Very well done! ^_^

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Jan 2015, 9:14 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL well I had you in mind! Expecially on a certain couple panels up there and IthinkyouknowwhatI'mtalkingaboutXDD

A little humor is important to have, in my opinion! Who better to use than Daggot? <3 lolol

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view Alicia the Bard's profile

26th Jan 2015, 5:20 PM

Alicia the Bard

This is not what I was expecting! Love it!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Jan 2015, 9:14 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol thank you so much!

Yea I like to keep you guys on your toes, LOL XD

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view Centcomm's profile

26th Jan 2015, 5:54 PM

Centcomm

Oh god im blind!!! a gee string .. gods really????! MY EYES! .. GO GO GO ! get the girl!!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Jan 2015, 9:18 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL!
Omg the sheer beauty and attractiveness of Daggot thong was too much for you!? Egads I'm so sorry! D:

lolOlol hurry up and leave the room, Hizruk!

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view Centcomm's profile

26th Jan 2015, 9:54 PM

Centcomm

yep it blew my circuits.. - BTW in case I didnt mention it . fantastic page !

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view rufiangel's profile

26th Jan 2015, 6:59 PM

rufiangel

Panel 1: Aww Hizruk-baby ;w; you made it up even with that shoulder, you brave baby...
Panel 2: XD; Hizruk-baby's face is so cute, my only sadness is that it is not bigger XD
Panel 3: Yeah, good call baby.
Panel 4.1: Second thoughts here? Nao? ;w; Awww Hizzy... (Love this angle btw, and how we get to see the sky and the stars!)
Panel 4.2: Steeling self program initiating, please wait...
Panel 4.3: DECISION MADE.
Panel 5: When is the Hizruk-baby I ordered arrivi--
Panel 6: Oh, THERE you are. XD (Really love how you captured the movement here with his body, by the way - looks like a really painful slam! And the detail in the soot - love it :D)
Panel 7: Yeah, you had to land on THAT side, didn't you.
Panel 8: I LOVE THIS PANEL. XDDD Omigosh, so so so cute!! And he looks like his innocence is flying awayyyy XD
Panel 9: Yeah... ... ... ... all I know is that you shaded this bum AND the bum below it differently even though I know you could have gotten away with a copy and paste, which leads me to believe you had A LOT of fun torturing Hizruk-baby (and readers) with that thong-clad pair of buns. :P
Panel 10: Love that little 'Egad' in there XD
Panel 11: Wow, I can't imagine how much pain it must have been to make this little key box, but it really looks good! :D Well done!! (And how convenient indeed XD)
Panel 12: Ooooh, sneaky Hizruk-baby. <3 Good memory! (And... I know this isn't the point but seeing him sprawling on his bed like a diva in the BG is just lol XDDD)
Panel 13: Thieving Hizruk-baby! Oh gosh... I just hope you don't get caught, honey! Oh Daggot. XD;;;

It's a good page Serps!! Don't know what was causing your grief but I likey :D

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Jan 2015, 11:49 AM

HeSerpenty

Rufi your comments always brighten my day! That's a lot of panels and you commented EACH of em' XDD. I didn't realize those top panels would turn out so small XD--OOPS MY BAD :D

So Hizruk just added another mental scar with what he just saw, but... lolol at least it directed his gaze to them keys! Which will come in handy :3. That keybox was my dread for this whole pageXD. That and the diva flashback LOL

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view Slim Kittens's profile

26th Jan 2015, 7:59 PM

Slim Kittens

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Jan 2015, 11:49 AM

HeSerpenty

I see... you're speechless

Don't worry.. you'll get used to the beauty that is Daggot thong (LOL)

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27th Jan 2015, 2:53 AM

Nessa

Nooo! My eyes!!! :-)

Poor Hizruk (and I) may never recover from that sight! ;-)

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Jan 2015, 11:50 AM

HeSerpenty

I knoow! It'll take your eyes years to recover from the beauty they just beheld! LOL

Haha yea as if Hizruk wasn't traumatized ENOUGH in his life XDD

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view Damatris's profile

27th Jan 2015, 3:35 AM

Damatris

Lololol!! Well, I guess we had been without Daggot for too long now. xDD

Hizzy, don't you dare to get careless and caught! :O

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Jan 2015, 11:51 AM

HeSerpenty

I know! We haven't seen it since the beginning of the first chapter! lolol

Normally in life when something seems too good to be true.. it is XD. Let's hope that's not the case here!

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view Matt Knab's profile

27th Jan 2015, 9:28 AM

Matt Knab

Haha, the thong is now canon, eh? XD

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Jan 2015, 11:52 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL, weeell...this is actually it's second appearance in the comic XDDD

Tho it has been a while! Oh, it is SO canon, Matt LOL

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view Matt Knab's profile

28th Jan 2015, 12:01 PM

Matt Knab

Ugh, I must have blocked it from my memory. XD

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view Jarvi's profile

27th Jan 2015, 9:43 AM

Jarvi

This is... a really.... nice butt there.... oh god .>.<.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Jan 2015, 11:52 AM

HeSerpenty

I knew you'd be impressed! LOL

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view DLKmusic's profile

27th Jan 2015, 5:59 PM

DLKmusic

A g-string.... Really? I'm gonna have nightmares over that

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Jan 2015, 11:53 AM

HeSerpenty

Heeeee.... likes the breeze? LOL

O dear, I'm sorry. Here... *hands DLKMusic a 'forget those panels" potion'* now, just refrain from scrolling back up XDD

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view Lt. Dom's profile

28th Jan 2015, 12:56 PM

Lt. Dom

mmmmm look at that butt.


mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm yeah

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Jan 2015, 2:19 PM

HeSerpenty

Hard to resist, amiright?

Lollol... yea I'm tootally guilty of some shameless fan service here! XDD

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view Alicia's profile

28th Jan 2015, 11:32 PM

Alicia

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Jan 2015, 11:35 PM

HeSerpenty

L.O.L

WHO COULD RESIST THAT?? I think we could all say we're a bit jealous of that book in his arms XDD

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view DLKmusic's profile

29th Jan 2015, 11:10 AM

DLKmusic

Ack, Agh, Arg!

The Nightmares CONTINUE!!!!

Can I get another potion, Heserpenty?

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view JayyLyn's profile

1st Feb 2015, 8:20 AM

JayyLyn

NUUUUUUUUUU!!!! IT BURNS!! WHYYYY!!!! Lololololol!! XDXDXDXD

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view HeSerpenty's profile

2nd Feb 2015, 9:05 PM

HeSerpenty

It hurts SO GOOD, right?? llolol

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view Proxy170's profile

1st Feb 2015, 8:49 AM

Proxy170

LOL Daggot butt XD I hope you were drawing this page on butt night? lol

I love that you always come up with new panel shapes and framing. Definitely the most unique of any comic I've read on CF!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

2nd Feb 2015, 9:05 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL sadly Proxy... I was not XD
this happened on a regular night.....which makes it all the more horrifying XDDD

Thank you so much! I try to keep in interesting anyway XD :D

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view Chris the Blue's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 7:03 AM

Chris the Blue

How is he resisting the urge to draw on him?

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view HeSerpenty's profile

3rd Mar 2015, 11:15 AM

HeSerpenty

I know the temptation would be too strong for ME! xDD

I guess Hizzy has the bigger task in mind! XD

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