Chapter 3.15-- Up to No Good

posted 15th Dec 2014, 10:03 AM

Chapter 3.15-- Up to No Good
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view HeSerpenty's profile

15th Dec 2014, 10:03 AM

HeSerpenty

Aaaaah, Keymen, you ruined the moment! Maybe a grown man shouldn't sit on a wagon cover made pretty much of cloth ;P. Smart guuy
Oooo our serpent friend (or foe?) looks like he's up to somethin! Wonder what it could be, EGADz!
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Bit of an artistic note.. I'm tryin somethin different! For panels that take place at night and outside I'm trying white panel borders. I think the white looks much nicer than the black for that side of the color wheel. What do you guys think?
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Please vote for us! Last week with the steamy sunset incentive-- next week there'll be somethin else! :D


view Damatris's profile

15th Dec 2014, 12:20 PM

Damatris

Oh Keymen... XD Sitting on cloth isn't the best idea.
And that serpent! I love the feel of movement it has! <3<3

view HeSerpenty's profile

15th Dec 2014, 4:18 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you! Lol man my own creatures are super hard for me to draw--that ain't even right XD

view Matt Knab's profile

15th Dec 2014, 12:33 PM

Matt Knab

Oops... Hope no one was looking this way. >.>

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Dec 2014, 12:48 AM

HeSerpenty

view marshallreeves's profile

15th Dec 2014, 3:08 PM

marshallreeves

I agree with Damatris up above - the snake has a very cool/well done movement to it.

Also I think the white borders look nice in the night scene!
Cool page :)

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Dec 2014, 12:50 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you for the feedback! :D
Lol my own serpents are way too hard for me to draw XDD.. but I'm happy the movement came out well!

view Slim Kittens's profile

15th Dec 2014, 4:14 PM

Slim Kittens

Keymen meant to do that.

The white borders look good.

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Dec 2014, 12:52 AM

HeSerpenty

Yes! Of course he..did XDD

Alright good! *marks in the 'people like it' column* :D

view TheD-Wrek's profile

15th Dec 2014, 5:53 PM

TheD-Wrek

Dat snake is up to something... O_O

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Dec 2014, 1:00 AM

HeSerpenty

view rufiangel's profile

15th Dec 2014, 9:32 PM

rufiangel

Well done doing this on a fresh page!! I like the white panelling, I think it works well. :D

That Keymen scene is the best XD;;;;; *love love love* He's quickly becoming my second-favourite next to Hizruk-baby XD

Oh, and love your serpent creature!! That curling fluid motion down the vent was done so well!! <3

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Dec 2014, 1:04 AM

HeSerpenty

So far the feedback about the white panels have been good!! This pleases me :D

Lol! I'm so happy to hear that you have no idea xD. I loove that crazy guy and I want others to love him too :D!

And thank you! He's still real hard for me to draw, but.. I suppose I'll get used to it the more he's in the comic XD.

I love your comments they always make me so happay <33 :D

16th Dec 2014, 6:13 AM

Guesticus

Sneaky-sneaky goes the snakey-wakey :D

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18th Dec 2014, 3:06 PM

HeSerpenty

Say THAT 12 times fast! XDD

lolol

view Jarvi's profile

16th Dec 2014, 6:43 AM

Jarvi

Hahah Keymen, you silly goose :D

That serpent.. is probably the same one that helped Hizruk? :o

17th Dec 2014, 7:26 AM

Guesticus

view HeSerpenty's profile

18th Dec 2014, 3:07 PM

HeSerpenty

Tis! But for once he doesn't seem to be following Hizruk... hmmm I wonder what he IS doing >__>;

view Jarvi's profile

19th Dec 2014, 2:22 AM

Jarvi

Snaking around? *snorts*

view TAOMark's profile

16th Dec 2014, 6:54 AM

TAOMark

He kinda was asking for it just sitting there.

view HeSerpenty's profile

18th Dec 2014, 3:07 PM

HeSerpenty

Toootally *shakes head* lol

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16th Dec 2014, 10:12 AM

Confettirainbowpony

LMAO!! I had to double take on that last panel with Keymen!! ....O____O "did he just...?" LOL nice. LOVE your sunset-to-night transition panels too!! And nice idea with the white! I love how much thought u put into your technique! *_*

view HeSerpenty's profile

18th Dec 2014, 3:09 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol! scene goes from super touching to.. -____-.. REALLY, Keymen? XDD. But I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought it was funny!

Thank you so much for the feedback your comments always brighten my day <3. I think I'm gonna stick with white borders for outside nighttime :D

view LeRenardRoux's profile

16th Dec 2014, 12:19 PM

LeRenardRoux

Better hope it doesn't rain, Keymen. *eyeroll*

view HeSerpenty's profile

18th Dec 2014, 3:09 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL
I don't know why that was so funny to me but it was XDD.

Seriously Keymen -__-...sheesh XD

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17th Dec 2014, 4:39 PM

HapyCow

I like this page SO HARD. O.O SOOOO HARD. All that purple makes me the happiest cow in the land. :D <333 Great job!

view HeSerpenty's profile

18th Dec 2014, 3:10 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much hapy!!! I really needed that boost <33

I'm so happy to make you a hapy cow XDDD (LOL)- purple is QUITE a lovely color <33.

view Alicia's profile

18th Dec 2014, 9:28 PM

Alicia

Oooh... getting excited for this next scene! :D

view HeSerpenty's profile

20th Dec 2014, 6:42 PM

HeSerpenty

This pleases me! XD

view Calisa's profile

19th Dec 2014, 11:41 AM

Calisa

Keymen's half is the perfect combination of touching and funny xD and I love the movement of the mystery serpent, those kind of panels are one of the things I love about SoO. :)

view HeSerpenty's profile

21st Dec 2014, 12:16 AM

HeSerpenty

Lol I'm so glad that's what I was hoping for! Gotta have some comic relief here n there XD

D'aw thank u Kara <3..such a nice compliment :D

view Proxy170's profile

20th Dec 2014, 2:49 PM

Proxy170

Oooh something sinister is happening...I know it! Love the colors you picked! And how did you do the brick texture so well? Please tell me you used a texture and not all by hand??? D:

view HeSerpenty's profile

21st Dec 2014, 12:16 AM

HeSerpenty

Worry not...that is most DEFInitely a texture XD. There is no way I could get a page done in a week if I had to hand draw all that brickwork!

And yes.. something sinister indeeedd bwuahahaaa!

view DLKmusic's profile

20th Dec 2014, 8:57 PM

DLKmusic

I'm kinda ok with the white for nighttime borders either way, but to be honest, the border that impressed me the most was the the 2-tone border in the last frame. Very subtle, and at drew your attention to what was going on in the frame itself.

That's my 2 cents worth, lol.

view HeSerpenty's profile

21st Dec 2014, 12:15 AM

HeSerpenty

It's worth a lot more than two cents <3

Thank you for the feedback! I'm glad the subtle change did it's purpose in drawing attention :D
the white borders are very minor-- just something I thought might be cool. As long as its not a blaring "ew Serpy don't do it".... I'm happy! :D

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