Chapter 3.12-- The Plan

posted 22nd Nov 2014, 4:15 AM

Chapter 3.12-- The Plan

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22nd Nov 2014, 4:15 AM

HeSerpenty


"No one is that stupid"? Kalverick.. hello, meet HIZRUK. XDD
Good thing his mind is in such a tizzy over Keymen that he doesn't stop to think about Hizruk right now. Why IS his mind in such a tizzy over Keymen? That happy-go-lucky silly fellow? He's completely harmless! Right? >__>
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Just to let you beautiful people know.. I'm leavin sunday for a family vacation up to the mountains and I won't be back til Saturday! So bad news is.. no update next week QAQ. Good news is.. I'M gonna go have a great time! XDD
But good news that may apply to you is I'm gonna reeally try to draw a few pages ahead up there.. MAYbe try to have 2 updates the week I get back! But we'll see about that XD. Not gonna make a promise I don't know if I can keep :3. I love ya guys and I'll miss ya! I'll try to come up with a little something to update while I'm gone to remind you about me... *sniffs* so you don't forGET! QAQ (lol)

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view Slim Kittens's profile

22nd Nov 2014, 9:51 AM

Slim Kittens

You're right, Kalverick. No one is that stupid (see previous page).

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view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Nov 2014, 5:57 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL XD
Exactly hahaha

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view TheD-Wrek's profile

22nd Nov 2014, 9:52 AM

TheD-Wrek

Ha, that no one is that stupid line cracked me up cause well, you know. Lol. XD

Have a fun trip, Serp!!!!! Happy early thanksgiving!! :)

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22nd Nov 2014, 5:58 PM

HeSerpenty

*shakes head and sighs at Hizruk* Eeeeyup.. I know XD lolol

Aw thanks D! I'm gonna miss all you guys like crazy! But I'm gonna work on the Thanksgivin pic before I go!

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view Centcomm's profile

22nd Nov 2014, 10:03 AM

Centcomm

Pleaae Please Please let let Hizruk feed him his face Pluuuuuueeeeese!

Also please be safe on your trip :D

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22nd Nov 2014, 5:59 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol! You're not the only one who wishes this I'm sure! Hehe

And thank you Centy! I will! I'll miss you guys T^T

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22nd Nov 2014, 8:44 PM

Slim Kittens

Concerning any brewing confrontation between Hizruk and Kalverick (a certainty at some point), just an observation from my reading of your characters. One characteristic bred into anyone destined for combat is mental toughness. I think that years of surviving brutal treatment in prison would have done that for Hizruk. Kalverick on the otherhand is vicious and mean; a bully. Any confrontation is likely to be a junkyard dog (Kalverick) versus a honey badger (Hizruk).

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view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Nov 2014, 1:30 AM

HeSerpenty

I love this comment <3
I want people to think about and analyze the characters! I'd say your pretty spot on! The disdain those two have for one another runs preetty deep..as we'll come to learn more :3.
Confrontation is DEFinitely brewing!

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22nd Nov 2014, 12:16 PM

RandomCitizen

Well. That cinched it.

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22nd Nov 2014, 5:59 PM

HeSerpenty

lolol
;D
I'd say so :P

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view Proxy170's profile

22nd Nov 2014, 12:29 PM

Proxy170

I don't know if I've noted it before, but Kalverick's character design PERFECTLY sends the message of villain >:)

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view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Nov 2014, 6:00 PM

HeSerpenty

I'm so glad to hear that prox! Part of me wonders if he looks intimidating enough--- but he's not the PHYSICALLY terrifying type of villain.
I may or may not get one of THOSE types later ;D

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view JayyLyn's profile

22nd Nov 2014, 3:57 PM

JayyLyn

no one except....>_> i love your highlight lines and sunset colors ^.^! and i really like your storytelling flow! it's too perfect!! :D i love how you give each character's reaction has its own panel and everything...your timing is awesome! anyways, have fun on vacation! happy thanksgiving! and don't worry, no one could possibly forget about you! lol!^_^

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22nd Nov 2014, 6:03 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much, truly! That kind of feedback and reassurance really keeps me goin <3--- and it means a lot comin from ya!
I hope you have a great thanksgiving as well! I'll miss all of you! <33.. and I'm so THANKful for you and all the other wonderful supporters I have! :D

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22nd Nov 2014, 6:55 PM

HapyCow

You finished this so fast! We make a good team. :) that's a pretty cool brick wall there in the background, is that a texture or drawn?

Oh kalverick..I like the old guy, he reminds me of the emperor from Star Wars ;) I hope he sounds like him too. Anyway have a great vacation! Maybe I'll see ya on chatzy before you leave..I work late tonight though

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22nd Nov 2014, 9:06 PM

HeSerpenty

We DO make a good team! Lolol I was thinkin we need to get together once a week so I can finish all my lines in one sitting EVERY time :P
Lol.. and it's definitely a texture. I wish I was cool enough to have the patience to draw such pretty bricks XD. But heeeeyll naww I don't XD.

He does kinda give off the Emperor feel! Now I can't imagine his voice any OTHER way XDD. I hope I'll get to see ya! I'll be up late...finishing a buncha stuff XDD. But in case I don't I hope you have a great Thanksgiving too!!

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view DLKmusic's profile

22nd Nov 2014, 8:41 PM

DLKmusic

Enjoy your Turkey Day!

And btw, it's nice to see a Machiavellian villain every once in a while... you don't have to be strong to be ruthless.

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22nd Nov 2014, 9:08 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you!! You enjoy yours as well!

And thank you! <3
That's exactly right! Kal may not be the most threatening to look at.. but he is DEFinitely wicked and ruthless. Just wait til we learn more :D

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24th Nov 2014, 6:03 PM

DLKmusic

heh heh heh, I was actually referring to the council member (don't know his name). This guy strikes me as a VERY dangerous person to be on the bad side of.

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29th Nov 2014, 6:22 PM

HeSerpenty

Oh! Pffff lololol *shakes head at self*
Well I'm glad to hear that too! Because him and the other council members are the more prominent "bad guys"...and Kal does their bidding-- so I hope they come off that way! :3

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view Spelledeg's profile

22nd Nov 2014, 9:13 PM

Spelledeg

Wowww, I love how this has built up to this :D your ebb & flow with storytelling is really nice. And aw, Hizzy, so muh 'gonna do that' spunktude. <3

Really though, you've captured a lot of intensity.

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23rd Nov 2014, 1:25 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you SO much, this comment made me very very encouraged and happy <3
Pacing can always be one of those challenging things you always wonder if you're doing right XD--so this feedback is great!

Spunktude XDD.. I love that word!

(also some parts of this page was inspired by YOU btw :D. The bright line art on Kal's armor :3. Cept I only did it on metallic lines cuz in my style they didn't look right anywhere else XD. Just thought I'd share that with ya! :D)

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23rd Nov 2014, 3:01 AM

rufiangel

Awww... Hizruk-baby is in so much pain ;__; I hope he manages to get some form of healing soon...! At least a salve or some disinfectant!! -_-;;

Also, all my favourite heroes tend to have a blend of courage and stupidity. XD;;

Have a brilliant holiday! :D <3 Take your break with gusto and have funnn!

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23rd Nov 2014, 8:35 AM

HeSerpenty

He iiis T^T. Unfortunately with his plans for the day... he's not gonna be around ANYone let along a healer!

LOL! Then Hizzy is the hero for YOU, my friend! XDDD

Thanks so much! I hope you have a wonderful week as well! I'm gonna miss you AND Serpamia Flare! <3

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view Damatris's profile

23rd Nov 2014, 7:13 AM

Damatris

Oh Kalverick... You are being far too sensible about jailbreak.

And does this mean that we will see Keymen again soon? I sure do hope so.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Nov 2014, 8:37 AM

HeSerpenty

I know, right? He's too riled up about Keymen he's not thinking clearly! (great timing for Hizruk XDD)

And yes! VERY soon in fact! :D

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view Jarvi's profile

24th Nov 2014, 1:52 AM

Jarvi

I believe in you Hizruk :D

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view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Nov 2014, 6:23 PM

HeSerpenty

Hehe..only you would, Dad <333
He needs all the support he can get! XD

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24th Nov 2014, 11:05 AM

Guesticus

Was trying to find the old classic gag of bugs Bunny saying "He don't know me very well, do he?" but couldn't find it :(

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29th Nov 2014, 6:23 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol! Awww man, that woulda been fitting :P

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25th Nov 2014, 3:58 PM

LeRenardRoux

Poor Hizruk looks so young in that flashback. :(

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view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Nov 2014, 6:25 PM

HeSerpenty

He is <:'{
But..at least he's out now? Aaah but he's gonna sneak back IN.. *siiighs*..the anxiety D:

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view Slim Kittens's profile

27th Nov 2014, 7:25 AM

Slim Kittens

Happy Thanksgiving Serpy and thank you for your webcomic.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Nov 2014, 6:27 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you soo much <3
I hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving! I just got back from my trip and it was da bomb-- but it's lovely to come home and see such nice comments <33.
Thank YOU because it's you wonderful readers that keep me goin! *hugs*

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