Chapter 3.10-- Getting Worse

posted 8th Nov 2014, 11:51 AM

Chapter 3.10-- Getting Worse

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view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Nov 2014, 11:51 AM

HeSerpenty

What's this? Main character finally comes back into the comic after over two months? (hard to believe it's been that long XD)

Hizruk..buddy.. you need a doctor O_o. A crazy-haired, blue-eyed doctor to be exact :D. (see if you can guess why Hizzy was half-soaking his upper half in the cool stream without me havin to explain it-- 10 brownie points to they who understand! :D XD)
Stay tuned for next page! Where we might get a MOTIVE for why he's doin all this! And it might not be AS selfless and heroic as we think >__>
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view TheD-Wrek's profile

8th Nov 2014, 12:01 PM

TheD-Wrek

Ouch. Poor Hizzy...

But dat grass in the last panel looks awesome. :D

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view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Nov 2014, 10:01 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks D! :D

And yea..its lookin kinda nasty that owie D:

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view VulturesUnderTheMoon's profile

8th Nov 2014, 12:03 PM

VulturesUnderTheMoon

Nothing matter to me except for Keymin.....

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view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Nov 2014, 10:02 PM

HeSerpenty

Lololol.... nevermind the festering and potentially fatal wound--KEYMEN IS ALL THAT COUNTS XDD

Hehe, well I'm glad you like him!

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view Damatris's profile

8th Nov 2014, 12:11 PM

Damatris

Ouuuch! That looks a bit infected... I hope that overgrown lizard wasn't poisonous. T^T Hurry up Keymen, your doctoring skills are needed.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Nov 2014, 10:03 PM

HeSerpenty

Yea it's certainly lookin pretty nasty!
Lol yes Keymen HURRY and get here! I guess we can all guess how their first meeting is gonna go XDD :P

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view Alicia's profile

8th Nov 2014, 12:12 PM

Alicia

Aw, poor Hizruk. ;_; GO GET THAT LOOKED AT! It could be infected! QAQ

Hizruk, what you need to do right now is go talk to Merek about all of this. Seriously. (That's what I would do if I was in this situation.)

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8th Nov 2014, 10:04 PM

HeSerpenty

I agree! Ugh but of course Hizzy is one of those "suffer alone" types -__-

And you're totally right-- if only Hizruk knew how much coming to Merek with this would help him. *siighs* ...that boy *shakes head*

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view Jarvi's profile

8th Nov 2014, 12:18 PM

Jarvi

Come on Hizzy... don't be like the whole village :< You're a good guy! Me and Cedric believe in you!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Nov 2014, 10:05 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol oh, Dad.. how did I know you and Cedric would be rooting for him to do this rescue mission? XDD :P <3

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view Jarvi's profile

9th Nov 2014, 12:41 AM

Jarvi

We're just that predictable <sighs> xD

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view Sleeper's profile

8th Nov 2014, 12:23 PM

Sleeper

Someone needs some anti-venom. stat!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Nov 2014, 10:06 PM

HeSerpenty

Quick! Before that arm needs to be AMPUTATED D:

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view Stever's profile

8th Nov 2014, 12:43 PM

Stever

I think he's going to need a bottle of iodine for those :o

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view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Nov 2014, 10:07 PM

HeSerpenty

At the very least! QAQ

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view Matt Knab's profile

8th Nov 2014, 1:45 PM

Matt Knab

Now THAT's how to get a soak in the river!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Nov 2014, 10:08 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol.
That's Hizruk for ya-- windows and river-soaking are two things he knows best, I guess XDD

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view Centcomm's profile

8th Nov 2014, 1:58 PM

Centcomm

wow ... really awesome page Serpy ! AND yes GO rescue HER!! damn it man !! YOU CAN DO IT !

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8th Nov 2014, 10:09 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks a lot Centy! <3
Yes Hizruk make the chapter more interesting!! IGNORE THE FESTERING WOUND :D :D

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view Centcomm's profile

8th Nov 2014, 10:17 PM

Centcomm

or he could go get his mom for help.. im sure she wont ask ANY questions .. *rolls eyes*

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view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Nov 2014, 10:19 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol... there's a lot of things he SHOULD probably do buuuuuut of COURSE.... he won't XDDD

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view Centcomm's profile

8th Nov 2014, 10:45 PM

Centcomm

Yep.. BTW awesome job with the injurys it looks like they are possably poisoned or going septic .. BAD for him but then hes not Human .. and hells bells man .. the dead man may not know it But YOU DO ! damn it .. :P

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view Lt. Dom's profile

8th Nov 2014, 2:47 PM

Lt. Dom

Hmmm very good internal struggle page. I sense a characters defining moment on the way.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Nov 2014, 10:10 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks Dom! He has a lot to internally struggle about :P
Hopefully next page will drop some more clues! :D

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8th Nov 2014, 2:59 PM

DLKmusic

I agree with Alicia. you should talk to Merek about all of this, but you need to stop looking at him as the bad guy first.

As for motive, you can do it to be a hero, you can do it to save a life... OR... you can do it to STICK IT TO THE COUNCIL.

Quite frankly, any one of those motives will work for me!

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8th Nov 2014, 10:13 PM

HeSerpenty

I agree with you guys as well--- Merek would be able to help him a lot more than he thinks. but you're right.. he definitely needs to overcome this resentment and distrust first T^T

I'm sure the motive has aspects of ALL of those, especially the last one XD, mixed in there! Next page will answer the motive question for sure <3

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view Proxy170's profile

8th Nov 2014, 5:59 PM

Proxy170

Really nice job making the hair feel wet! I find that hard to do -___-

And Hizzy...you should really get that checked out...o.O

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8th Nov 2014, 10:15 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks Proxy! Its always been a challenge for me too, so I'm glad it looks okay! :D

Yes...yes he should >__> (but we all know he won't -__-; XD)

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view HapyCow's profile

8th Nov 2014, 6:19 PM

HapyCow

I'm really feeling those backgrounds these last few pages!! That grass looks so awesome! I mean Hizruk looks great too ;) ...wait maybe this is a bad time for a winky face, those are some serious injuries

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view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Nov 2014, 10:16 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol thanks Hapy! Believe it or not I'm really happy to hear compliments on the grass! Cuz I felt unsure about it XDD

But yea I guess the festering wounds take away a lot of "sexy" potential here XDD

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view Slim Kittens's profile

8th Nov 2014, 7:25 PM

Slim Kittens

"He's dead. He won't know if I don't keep it."
Are you kidding? He'll HAUNT you if you don't.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Nov 2014, 10:17 PM

HeSerpenty

OMG you're right :O

Hizruk! You heard that right??? D:

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view Slim Kittens's profile

9th Nov 2014, 8:16 AM

Slim Kittens

As for the soaking, I'm going to guess that it's an attempt to draw out any infection? Or..we had a snake that would soak itself prior to shedding it's skin, but I don't know if the human form serpents do that (ewww..gross). Don't know if that would help in this case though.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Nov 2014, 10:08 AM

HeSerpenty

Yes, exactly! Or at least sooth the painful wound :D
(funnny story about the shedding XDD... I've always had it to where human form serpents go through an annual phase where their skin is super dry and itchy for this shedding purpose XDD. Just thought I'd mention that XDD)

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view rufiangel's profile

10th Nov 2014, 6:58 AM

rufiangel

Hizruk-baby~~~!!! :D <3 <3 Gosh, am I glad to see you again! But...

Those bite marks look SO PAINFUL!!! ;___; You need a healer, STAT!!

And uhm-- uhm-- sticking his head into the water to look for fish? XD;;; Or... just soaking his shoulder 'cause he didn't wanna submerge his trousers? Aaaah those are my guesses...

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view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Nov 2014, 10:10 AM

HeSerpenty

We need like... Cain to show up with his healing powers, QUICK! XDDD

Lol! Well any OTHER time it'd be for the fishies XDD... but your second guess hits it! That shoulder be painin! QAQ

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10th Nov 2014, 10:42 AM

Guesticus

He is going to do it because he knows it's the proper thing to do (almost said the 'right' or 'correct' thing, but it's neither, it's simply the 'proper' thing to do because he's not an arsehole)

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view HeSerpenty's profile

11th Nov 2014, 12:55 PM

HeSerpenty

I'm sure that'll be mixed in with his motives, yes! But you are right, Hizruk is indeed not an "arsehole" lolol

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10th Nov 2014, 10:44 AM

Guesticus

Actually, the bite doesn't look infected, it's not good bt it doesn't look infected, to me anyway (still needs to be seen by someone who knows the correct way of handling those sorts of things)

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11th Nov 2014, 12:56 PM

HeSerpenty

It's certainly not lookin any BETTER anyway! Annd will probably only get worse from here if not handled correctly D:

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view Calisa's profile

10th Nov 2014, 9:53 PM

Calisa

Awwww panels four and five I find especially beautiful and sad. Nice work, Serpy! And poor Hizzy <3 go get some help!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

11th Nov 2014, 1:00 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks Kara! I really was looking forward to this page <3
Hizzy needs help for sure! Perhaps from a certain character on his way :P

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view LeRenardRoux's profile

14th Nov 2014, 6:05 AM

LeRenardRoux

That bite is so cringeworthy. D: Hizruuuuuk

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view HeSerpenty's profile

15th Nov 2014, 9:16 AM

HeSerpenty

Yea it's lookin pretty nasty! D:

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