Chapter 3.09-- Snapped

posted 2nd Nov 2014, 9:15 PM

Chapter 3.09-- Snapped
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2nd Nov 2014, 9:15 PM

HeSerpenty

AT LAAAST. It's over. It's finished. And it didn't corrupt this time T^T
Sooo you know how sometimes when you have to completely redraw something it ends up looking better than the original? Well not this time XD. The old page was better :/
Sorry you had to wait two weeks for THIS T^T.
Also...SCENE CHANGE! :D
Wonder who we're gonna catch up with >__>
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You guys thank you SO much for all the encouraging comments and suggestions you left when I told ya about what happened to last page. I know I didn't reply to everyone-- please don't take it to heart! I've had a rough week on commenting on ANYthing cuz of this page. But each and every one of you was heard and appreciated and I feel so lucky to have you subbed to my comic!
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Also! Some new fan art by Alicia, lirvilas, and Centcomm :D. Be sure to check em' out cuz these guys are AWEsome!
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2nd Nov 2014, 9:48 PM

HeSerpenty

O yea.. and please vote for us :3
PLEASE XD. Even tho it's still Hellgiah's mug up in there! XD

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2nd Nov 2014, 10:21 PM

Jarvi

Cheers for stupid friends you can't get rid of ^^'
I love the background on the last panel.. or foregrond cause there's nothing closer? .O.O.
And much love to you Serpy <3

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2nd Nov 2014, 11:08 PM

HeSerpenty

I know, right? It's ALways the stupid ones that linger XD
Thanks Saari! I guess it's a weird combination of both foreground AND background? XD lol
And MORE love back to you <333-- thanks for cheerleadering me through this page!

3rd Nov 2014, 4:10 AM

Guesticus

Looks like simply 'ground' to me :P

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2nd Nov 2014, 10:46 PM

rufiangel

Serpy, don't worry! The page is still awesome-sauce!! >_<)/

Oh, Gwynnnnn D: that was such a ... sad rant ;___;*

Serafine is a butthead -.- (that 'time of month' comment ahahahahaha GO AWAY)

Aaaand... we're gonna catch up to Hizruk-baby!! Amirite?!?!? :D :D :D

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2nd Nov 2014, 11:11 PM

HeSerpenty

Aww thank you <33. The positive feedback is needed for THIS page XD

Yea..she hasn't been able to quite show it much in the comic yet but she's pretty darn devastated about all the dungeon crap T^T

And she is XD. I HATE when people say that to me if I get mad or upset at something. Omg do I hate it XD

Hhehehehe :D!!! You're right! :D

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2nd Nov 2014, 10:59 PM

Sleeper

Now I'm curious if real life serpents menstruate.

Great page though.

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2nd Nov 2014, 11:13 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol weeell MY serpents are quite different than snakes n whatnot in real life XD. Afterall... when in their human forms their bodies work juuust like a human's would--they just have added benefits like they won't get sick if they eat meat raw, heightened animal senses if they tap into it, etc etc. They're a bizzare animal serpents are-- reptile in one form, mammal in another XD.

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2nd Nov 2014, 11:19 PM

Sleeper

It makes perfect sense on your end, I get the impression they bear children rather than laying a clutch of eggs.

My curiosity is its own creature. (For anyone curious, they don't)

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2nd Nov 2014, 11:24 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha! That too would depend on whether or not the mother decides to go through the gestation period and birth in her human or serpent form XD.

For more facts you didn't really ask for-- in a females first trimester she can pick a form to carry out a pregnancy in. Whichever one she chooses..after the first trimester she cannot transform otherwise it'll kill the baby.
But..since being in serpent forms is generally not accepted anymore...serpenty women have the misfortune to give birth like human women XD. Yaaay lolol

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2nd Nov 2014, 11:31 PM

Sleeper

Little details like that are fun. They should take a hint from the marsupial folk in the next forest and just keep their young in belly pouches until they're old enough to crawl.

Sorry, couldn't help myself.

26th Jan 2016, 9:43 PM

Zimriel

A possibility is that they don't, but know that humans do - so the women joke about it, like we joke about various animal habits. The target of the joke is of course free to think of the joker, "what a jerk"... which is what we got here!

(Also not all *mammals* menstruate. Elsewhere in our clade, ovulation cycles work differently - "going in heat", and such. Elaine Morgan pointed out that human menstruation is inordinately dangerous to our females, and might be a "scar of evolution".)

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27th Jan 2016, 9:54 PM

HeSerpenty

I've always had it so that the serpenty people are in their human forms...their bodies function very much like humans-- though not quite the same. The more generations that are born into the human form... the less and less serpenty they become. Lots of this generation don't even tap in to the fact that they have heightened senses compared to that of a human,but one transformation into the Serpent form would solve that :3. Unfortunately.. the Council has made it frowned upon to transform into the Serpent form >___>

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3rd Nov 2014, 5:07 AM

Alicia

Wow, that friend of hers is thick. I love how she's all like :D about shopping. XD

Serpy, this page is great. It is really sad that you lost the original, especially if it turned out better than this one, but you don't have to tell us that! We wouldn't know any better! And I really admire your willpower to make a whole new one too! Yet another way in which I envy you, Serpy. (Seriously, this page is GREAT! And I am SUPER EXCITED to check in with Hizruk and see how the poor guy is doing. Kal, you leave him alone! Hissss! >:E)

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3rd Nov 2014, 11:19 AM

HeSerpenty

Lol Serafine is a woman of simple pleasures--- men, shopping, and shiny things XDD

Aw thank you so much <33. Lol I suppose I shouldn't share all my secrets all the time :P... but hearing all that really does make me feel better about this hell page.
One thing I realized through this whole fiasco is that I have such AWEsome friends and fans who support me through the chaos <3. In the end it was totally worth the do-over!

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3rd Nov 2014, 7:25 AM

TheD-Wrek

I like this Serafine. She's a peach. :3

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3rd Nov 2014, 11:20 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL D... I think you might be the ONLY one XDD

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3rd Nov 2014, 7:38 AM

Centcomm

Wow .. can she BE any more dense .. *slaps her with a trout* WAKE UP! sadly we all have friends like her ...

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3rd Nov 2014, 11:21 AM

HeSerpenty

I know, right? Definitely not a good friend to have around when you're upset about something -__-
And yes..we do XD. She's definitely inspired by real life circumstances XDD

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3rd Nov 2014, 11:44 AM

Ninabird

Ah well, at least she doesn't seem actually *malicious*. Just short a few brain cells.

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3rd Nov 2014, 1:47 PM

HeSerpenty

Exactly XD
Believe it or not she actually really does MEAN well, she just..has no idea how to help XDD

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3rd Nov 2014, 12:34 PM

Matt Knab

Love the embarrassed look in panel 3. :)

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3rd Nov 2014, 1:48 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks Matt! :D

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3rd Nov 2014, 1:02 PM

Stever

Personally I think one of the hardest things about redoing a page like yours is that you have so many panels. It's great for the reader, but man, as an artist it's tough.

Oh and that last panel is awesome!

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3rd Nov 2014, 1:51 PM

HeSerpenty

Yea the many panels are definitely a killer XDD--- specially since I start from scratch every week! But it's totally worth it to make my readers feel like they're getting a 2-in-1 deal! :D

And thank you! I'm trying to figure out a better way to do backgrounds. Hope it works!

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3rd Nov 2014, 2:51 PM

Proxy170

I dunno if I just noticed it, but I like how the scene change has a border color change :D And this page looks great! I actually feel a bit bad for Serafine :( Hard to get mad at someone who's that oblivious.

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3rd Nov 2014, 5:49 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks Proxy! I guess I wanna make sure people know the scene is changing in more ways than one XD

I do too XD...she doesn't know she's being a bad friend she really thought she was being a good one *shakes head*

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3rd Nov 2014, 5:05 PM

Slim Kittens

Panel 10. I know people who are JUST LIKE THAT. o_0

view HeSerpenty's profile

3rd Nov 2014, 5:51 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol me too!
I think we all can identify with that to some degree----so in that regard, Serafine serves her purpose!

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3rd Nov 2014, 8:48 PM

Calisa

You poor thing! T^T *hugs* I'm glad you're finished with it and here it is! Poor Gwynn xD Can't wait to see what's happening neeext. :3

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4th Nov 2014, 12:20 AM

HeSerpenty

Thanks Dad! I'm SOOOoooooo glad it's over XD. SO GLAD

I can't wait eitherrr XDD

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3rd Nov 2014, 11:57 PM

HapyCow

*hugs* I'm so proud you redrew it! I think it looks AMAZING, especially the backgrounds!!

I almost felt bad for Serafine, but then she said "must be that time of the month!" XD Aaand now I think she deserves a beating, haha.

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4th Nov 2014, 12:22 AM

HeSerpenty

<:') Thank you Hapy!! *glomps*.. I really need to hear that cuz I spilled my insecurity ALL over this page XDD. Probably cuz it gave me such a hard time :P

Also I know..I almost did too. But Ooooooo how the month comment irks me in the real life XD. Guess we all gotta have those friends XD

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4th Nov 2014, 12:33 PM

Lt. Dom

I'm really liking how fleshed out the mother is. She might be my favorite character at this point.

view DLKmusic's profile

4th Nov 2014, 9:52 PM

DLKmusic

I agree. I'm also intrigued at how "human" the serpentine are emotionally. Their reactions, their motivations, even their snarks.

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5th Nov 2014, 2:40 AM

HeSerpenty

Indeed "human" is a good way of putting it. Kind of ironic how they fear humans enough to kill any that trespass... but seemed to have BECOME quite human themselves over the years >__>

Thank you for the comment! <3

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5th Nov 2014, 2:38 AM

HeSerpenty

That means a lot to hear, Dom! Cuz I was concerned for a while that Gwynn might be considered the bland "doting mother" character type-- but there's so much more to her I haven't had a chance to portray yet!

So thank you so much,it's very reassuring! :D

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4th Nov 2014, 4:11 PM

LeRenardRoux

I think she meant "in your own (obnoxious infuriating irritating punch-in-the-face) way." :P

I gotta say the page looks pretty great. I really like the silhouette people in the background. I would probably try to draw them and then not feel like really drawing them and make them ugly sketches. The silhouette's a really good treatment.

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Nov 2014, 2:42 AM

HeSerpenty

That is EXACTLY what she meant XDD

Thanks Roux! Man I envy people that can come up with gorgeous crowd scenes where each person has it's own character..and the whole thing is a work of art. But alas-- I don't think i'll EVER have the patience for THAT XD. So I'm glad to hear the silhouettes are a success!

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5th Nov 2014, 7:50 PM

DLKmusic

I ah, also would like to put in a good word for Serafine. As mindless and shallow as she seems on the surface, it does appear to me that apart from family, she's the only person in the village not distancing herself from Gwynnith.

That does have to count for something.

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5th Nov 2014, 7:58 PM

HeSerpenty

You deserve a round of applause! Because despite her obliviousness and being very inconsiderate with her words..... she has been Gwynn's only friend (even if not a very good one) for like...15 years or so XD.
So you're absolutely right that DOES count for something! :3

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7th Nov 2014, 12:30 PM

Damatris

How oblivious can one get?

And Serpy, hush you! This page looks GOOD! <3I love the expressions and your scene changes flow so naturally.

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