Chapter 7.13-- Final Words

posted 20th Apr 2019, 12:51 AM

Chapter 7.13-- Final Words
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20th Apr 2019, 12:51 AM

HeSerpenty

RIP Alaya. You were a strong warrior, a good mother, and you fought even til the very end.

At least her final words really motivated a certain individual with the power to make a difference >_>


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20th Apr 2019, 1:06 AM

princess_lom

I will cry in a minute T_T

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22nd Apr 2019, 11:48 AM

HeSerpenty

*Comforts you* Don't cryyyyy :'D

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20th Apr 2019, 2:48 AM

HapyCow

Ooh, I definitely see Hizruk in there...those are some good genes, lol. I'm so tired right now, but anyways amazing page! It's really sad though, Alaya seemed pretty cool. RIP

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22nd Apr 2019, 11:49 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha yes very good dreams! Hizzy definitely takes after his great grandma <33333---this is very purposeful on my part considering what his role will be in modern times! :3 <3

Thanks so much Hapy! The good ones always die young :'D

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20th Apr 2019, 6:28 AM

DLKmusic

First things first... HAPPY EASTER!!!!

before I even read what was in the text bubbles, I could tell right away just by your artwork that that is Demas riding the Lacor. I gotta say, I'm really impressed comparing the young version to the old. Well done!!!

Then we add the text... Same ol' loveable fellow, that winning personality hasn't changed a bit in 60 years! Doesn't he just make you want to SQUEEEEE?!?!?

(vomit maybe, squee not so much.)

also of note, Alaya's look in panel three is incredible! It's hard to put into words how hauntingly expressive that image is. Probably the best 3/4 profile I've ever seen you do, which is saying a lot!

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20th Apr 2019, 2:22 PM

ShaRose49

I agree—that panel is incredible, it really stood out to me.

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20th Apr 2019, 2:21 PM

ShaRose49

What a tragic and yet beautiful story. Idk how anyone can see Helgiah as an unsympathetic character after this.

Also your shading is really good, I have trouble with that sometimes

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20th Apr 2019, 3:44 PM

Alicia

AHH! Nuuu! TOO SAD! (Actually perfect amount of sad, because you know how much I love sad. X'D)

Seriously though... those poor babies. T_T

20th Apr 2019, 3:59 PM

megados

Alaya's final words in the last panel are (I sure hope) prophetic. Very poignant; sad. :(

Echoing the sentiments above, the emotion in the scene comes through in the artwork, as much as it does in the dialogue! Good job! :D

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21st Apr 2019, 3:57 AM

Proxy170

Am I reading into it too much to think that that may be a younger Demas? :o

This page was so well drawn, Serpy! You can just FEEL the curse she's putting on them in her death!

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22nd Apr 2019, 7:06 AM

The Accidental Ninja

OHNO D:
This is a fantastic page, but sad :(
And now I, like everyone else, am wondering if that's a young Demas there.... he sure is old now if that's the case! xD

((Also I... hate to be that person, but I thought I should point out that Alaya's last speech bubble says "will will not last"))

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