Chapter 6.39-- Successful Escape

posted 14th Sep 2018, 4:45 PM

Chapter 6.39-- Successful Escape
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view HeSerpenty's profile

14th Sep 2018, 4:45 PM

HeSerpenty

FINALLY Hizruk and Keymen get a chance to talk X)

Wonder if anyone will notice a significant thing hiding in this page? >__>

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Man those establishing shot scenes X_X
One day I'll have a page where I like both the character AND the background drawings XD

Feels good to be back on Fridays!

Have a great week everyone!


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14th Sep 2018, 5:52 PM

Slim Kittens

There is a downed tree in the lower right foreground and a downed tree behind Keymen and Hizruk. The forest must be infested with Asian Longhorned Beetles. This fact will undoubted become important later in the story.

view HeSerpenty's profile

15th Sep 2018, 9:01 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha dam! You got it! The only one to get the right answer! :P

Lol I joke even tho these dang tree killing beetles are no joke! :'D

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14th Sep 2018, 6:05 PM

Alicia

HAND! GUYS, HAND! SNAKEY HAND! Doesn't anybody else see the hand?!

Okay, now that that's out of the way X'D please go on and continue with the conversation. I actually wanna know what's on both of their minds. lol

view HeSerpenty's profile

15th Sep 2018, 9:02 PM

HeSerpenty

WHAT HAND?? WHERE?? Lolol
I think it's time for a scene change? Lolol just kiddiiiing! We will know soon! Like...next week :P

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14th Sep 2018, 7:02 PM

PeterVonBrown

This page is beautifully done. I actually like the establishing shot. It's atmospheric for sure, and the speech bubbles draw you in... then the great movement with Hizruk coming up out of the frame... the tone from the start at the bottom to the surprise at the end - nicely done. Bravo!

view HeSerpenty's profile

15th Sep 2018, 9:03 PM

HeSerpenty

Wow thank you so much for the awesome feedback! It's really encouraging to hear when certain design choices for the page turn out to give the desired affect <3. Thank you, man! :D

14th Sep 2018, 7:53 PM

megados

Hizruk and Keymen have a lot they could discuss. Does Hizruk know this? :D

Nope, totally don't notice someone's serpent hand in there. Nope.

You don't like establishing shots? This one works; the mist in the back drop suggests some depth, as well as suggesting humidity and temperature.

view HeSerpenty's profile

15th Sep 2018, 9:05 PM

HeSerpenty

They most certainly do!

Hahaha and I don't blame you it's kinda hard to see it taking up that whole bottom right corner! LOL

Weeell what I don't like about establishing shots is...they have to be big and detailed haha! But..when they turn out well they're some of the pages I'm most proud of <3. Thanks so much!

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14th Sep 2018, 8:07 PM

The Accidental Ninja

Something significant... other than whoever seems to keep stalking Hizruk?? (is this the same person who was stalking him and Kilion earlier, I wonder?)
(also is the fallen tree significant at all?)


I'm glad Hizruk and Keymen finally get a chance to chat, but more than that, I'm really glad Hizruk feels like he can trust someone enough to actually talk about some stuff.

(And man, I'm struggling ridiculously with backgrounds/establishing shots for my own comic, and I'm not even colouring them. So all the kudos to you for your backgrounds in colour)

view HeSerpenty's profile

15th Sep 2018, 9:10 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha you got it! It's that dang stalker again! X"D...who'll learn who he is soon enough :3

I've been waiting for Hizruk and Keymen to get to know each other in canon for like 15 years LOL! It's all been in my head til now! This could be a very important relationship to the story :3

Thank you so much! Backgrounds have always been a struggle X__X and they are no easy feat! Just keep on doing them and eventually they start to get easier and easier. I think. Lololol maybe I lied just now they still hard X"D

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15th Sep 2018, 9:27 AM

DLKmusic

Cool page! And it actually is nice to see Hizzy opening up a bit to someone!

Hmmm... the mist and glare in the background is strangely ominous for some reason. I Hate glare... glare is evil!!!

Something Significant? At first I thought the serpy-hand in the last frame was Sneaky-Snake, but there are 4 claws on his hand, not 3. Soooo... we've now established that either Sneaky-Snake has 4 claws on his hand, or else that might be Kal in the background, not Sneaky-Snake...

Or maybe I'm just being too paranoid... except when it comes to Kal, there is no such thing as "too paranoid" !

<_< >_>

Love the page! here's another baseball.

view HeSerpenty's profile

15th Sep 2018, 9:14 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha but glaring evil is what makes comics interesting!! No??

Hehe it is indeed sneaky snake! :3
The three slash marks we've been seeing..you can consider it kind of a "signature" hehe not necessarily because he only has 3 claws ;D (It's important I promise! X"D LOL)

And you're right--don't ever get comfortable around Kal! Always be paranoid!

THANK U! <3

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15th Sep 2018, 9:51 AM

LeRenardRoux

Serpy that establishing shot is gorgeouuuuus *.*

And that creepy hand, daaaang.

view HeSerpenty's profile

15th Sep 2018, 9:15 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol thank you so much Roux! <333
That shot took me the longest by far X"D..it BETTER look decent :P

view Proxy170's profile

15th Sep 2018, 11:15 PM

Proxy170

Ok, so assuming that's the hand of our mystery serpent, and the fact he's seen here HAS to mean that it isn't just a mind play inside Hizruk, right? If so then who is it? Hmm the questions you generate...

And is he about to confess to what he did? :o At least he picked the best person to tell?

view HeSerpenty's profile

18th Sep 2018, 8:23 AM

HeSerpenty

Maybe soooo--- we'll learn the truth about ol' sneaky snakey soon! Perhaps by the end of the chapter :3

Best person indeed! Since Keymen already knows LOL--- it's good he'll have someone to be honest with.....since he can't exactly, he feels, tell his mom all this stuff XD

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16th Sep 2018, 12:52 AM

soiamthefreshprince

the landscape is amazing i love it when webcomic artists put so much work into a background it helps to set the scene. now i got to know whats on their minds some mysterious are sure to be unraveled cant wait.

view HeSerpenty's profile

18th Sep 2018, 8:27 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much for saying so! It has always been a struggle to do backgrounds but they are so important in my opinion, haha so I'm glad this turned out alright! <3

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16th Sep 2018, 1:35 AM

MST3KFan

I spy with my little eye...something that is watching the duo talk!

view HeSerpenty's profile

18th Sep 2018, 8:28 AM

HeSerpenty

You got it! ;D
I think you mean someONE tho :3 hehehe

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17th Sep 2018, 12:17 AM

Jarvi

I see a tree, a tree, a tree, a creepy hand, a tree, a tree, and another tree... hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm....
I'm betting you meant the tree number 3.. it does look eerily suspicious...

view TheD-Wrek's profile

17th Sep 2018, 10:39 AM

TheD-Wrek

Spy Serpent just wants a friend that's all. Don't be shy little buddy. :3

view ShaRose49's profile

17th Sep 2018, 10:06 PM

ShaRose49

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

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